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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Doran Cooney » Fri May 18, 2018 1:37 am

Doran

Thread Name: The Meat of the Problem
City/Area: Rynmere/Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence? It's all pretty tame.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Twisting Your Body to Avoid Getting Knocked Down in a Crowd
Acrobatics: Stooping Low to Help Someone Up
Acrobatics: Learn Away from Punches to Reduce Impact
Acrobatics: Short Backwards Blind Hop
Acrobatics: Dodging Thrown Projectiles
Strength: Bracing for Impact of a Rioting Crowd
Strength: Maintaining Standing by Grabbing onto Something Sturdy
Strength: Supporting Another’s Weight
Unarmed Combat: Stepping Back Out of the Way of a Punch
Unarmed Combat: Ducking to Avoid a Punch
Unarmed Combat: Capitalising on an Overextended Punch to Knock One Off Balance
Endurance: Rolling With Punches

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised jaw and knuckles
Renown: Maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Val

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Thanking Someone for Caring for Them
Endurance: Not Fainting After Vomiting
Endurance: Forcing Oneself to Walk when Tired
Meditation: Counting Breaths to Keep Calm
Negotiation: Using Logic to Try to Prevent a Fight
Persuasion: Pleading to Get Ones Way
Socialization: Using Humor as a Distraction
Tactics: Walking Instead of Running to Avoid Suspicion

Non-skill:
Andaris: The People are Restless
Andaris: Meat Market Protest
Andaris: Shortage of Meat
Doran: Took Care of Val
Doran: Always Polite
Doran: Helps Those in Need
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises from being elbowed and shoved around
Renown: Maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Doran Cooney
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Posts: 171
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Location: Rynmere, Venora
Race: Human
Profession: Performer
Renown: +25
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Victor Amielle » Fri May 18, 2018 1:42 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Smell of Old Books
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: It's a job thread!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: Wear gloves when handling old books
Research: Old books need to be handled with care
Research: Old books need to be kept in a dark and dry environment
Research: Avoid opening old books more often than necessary
Research: Comparing current and historical research
Detection: The smell of old books

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I don't think so.
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Victor Amielle
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Posts: 152
Joined: Wed Jul 26, 2017 11:29 am
Location: Scalvoris
Race: Human
Profession: Researcher
Renown: +115
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Medals: 2
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1)

Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Max » Fri May 18, 2018 2:23 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A World of Hurt
City/Area: Slags Deep/The Beneath, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language and violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mercedes:
1 Defiance: Meld Can Be used In combat
2 Endurance: The Pain Of Being Tail-Whipped
3 Unarmed Combat(Brawling): Grapple the Legs First
4 Unarmed Combat(Brawling): Grappling to Immobilize Opponents
5 Unarmed Combat(Brawling): Pull Em' Down
6 Defiance: Softening The Earth To Cushion Impact
7 Discipline: Remain Focused On Victory
8 Leadership: Trust Those That Follow You

Non-skill:
Max: Wants to Fight Rupturers
Domain Magic: Abrogation
Ran'dar: Brutal Combat Instructor
Max: In Debt To Ran'dar Too

Max:
Acrobatics: Jumping
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Uppercut
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Front Kick
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Taking out a Knee
Endurance: Fighting After a Short Recovery from the Last
Endurance: Taking Hits from an Ithecal
Endurance: Accepting Pain as a State of Being
Tactics: Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Tactics: Playing to Yourself and Your Ally's Strengths

Non-Skill:
Stormy Skies: Masking the Movements of Yourself and Your Ally
Ran'dar: Will Teach and Protect in Exchange for Valuables
Mercedes: Powerful Strategist

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor cuts and bruises
Renown: Unlikely
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, for Mercedes
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Max
I am the storm, so wait
 
Posts: 274
Joined: Mon Nov 06, 2017 12:53 am
Location: Almund, Scalvoris
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: +212
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Medals: 4
Painting With Words (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Murderer (1) Survivor (1)

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Postby Doran Cooney » Fri May 18, 2018 3:15 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Chop Chop
City/Area: Rynmere/Venora
Notes/Warnings: Memory Thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Swinging an Axe
Strength: Alternating Carrying Methods to Work Different Muscles
Strength: Widening Your Stance to Increase Power of a Swing
Endurance: Using Numbness to Push Through Fatigue
Endurance: Switching Between Different Muscles to Slow Fatigue
Endurance: Letting the Weight of an Axe Carry It to Conserve Energy

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor muscle fatigue
Renown: Maybe?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Doran Cooney
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Posts: 171
Joined: Wed Oct 26, 2016 4:10 am
Location: Rynmere, Venora
Race: Human
Profession: Performer
Renown: +25
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Postby Zipper » Fri May 18, 2018 3:50 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sight
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: That's Keene Ward above me
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Attunement: Compass
Attunement: Compass: Able to measure direction and distance between the Attuner and held frequencies
Attunement: Compass: A mastery of direction and spatial awareness
Attunement: Dousing
Attunement: Omnivision
Discipline: Staying focused in an Attunement trance
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: For Attunement, yes
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Zipper
Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Bitch
 
Posts: 529
Joined: Sat May 13, 2017 5:14 am
Race: Human
Profession: Professional Scowler
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Templates
Letters
Medals: 17
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Guild Master (1)
Review Master (1) Living Legend (1) Pioneer (1) Right In The Feels (1)
First Kiss (1) Murderer (1) Enemy of My Enemy (1) Dreamer (1)
Legend In Waiting (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (2) Event Medal (1)

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Postby Zipper » Fri May 18, 2018 4:14 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Blaming of the Necromancer
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: That's Keene Ward two posts above me
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Zipper
Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Bitch
 
Posts: 529
Joined: Sat May 13, 2017 5:14 am
Race: Human
Profession: Professional Scowler
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Templates
Letters
Medals: 17
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Guild Master (1)
Review Master (1) Living Legend (1) Pioneer (1) Right In The Feels (1)
First Kiss (1) Murderer (1) Enemy of My Enemy (1) Dreamer (1)
Legend In Waiting (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (2) Event Medal (1)

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Postby Padraig » Fri May 18, 2018 2:37 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Relief Effort: Collapse!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Faith

Knowledge:
Persuasion: String theory makes no sense
Psychology: Awareness of what separates you from madness is useful
Psychology: Making the world a better place starts with you


Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Padraig

Knowledge:
Construction: Where to shore up fallen buildings
Construction: Applying the theory of physics to a collapsed building
Detection: Identifying key areas in a collapsed area.
Leadership: State your demands clearly
Persuasion: State opinion as fact
Persuasion: String theory

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes, helping in the relief effort.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Padraig
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Posts: 875
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 11:22 am
Race: Human
Renown: +544
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Medals: 23
Character of the Month (1) Story of the Month (2) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) True Love (1)
Married (1) Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)
Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

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Postby Faith » Fri May 18, 2018 8:33 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Relief Effort: Identification
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Deals with death
Requested Rewards:


Faith

Knowledge:
Leadership: Explaining the real reason why you do it
Leadership: You won't get thanked for this.
Meditation: Focus on the dawn for a feeling of calm
Meditation: Being outside can aid you in clearing your mind.
Sociology: Religious significance of death
Sociology: Dignity in death is a societal construct.

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
"To be free is not merely to cast off one's chains, but to live in a way that respects and enhances the freedom of others."
Ashan 718: Relief Effort!
Cally's Restaurant & Charity | Isonomia Faction|Luna's Dream (Orphanage)
Beacon Village~Scalvoris Soup Kitchen
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Faith
Life, Death & The In-Between
 
Posts: 2985
Joined: Sat Jun 25, 2016 8:12 am
Race: Human
Profession: Chef / Professor
Renown: +1000
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Medals: 52
Character of the Month (1) Contributor of the Month (1) Story of the Month (1) World Developer (1)
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Shop Keeper (1) Mentor (1) Ambassador (1)
Supporter (1) Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Ascension (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (4)
Hoarder (1) ...ow. (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (2) True Love (1) Married (1) Changed (1)
Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1)

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Postby Alistair » Sat May 19, 2018 6:52 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: What Could I Ever Do For You?
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Minor sexual themes. Doran is GST so he doesn't get any rewards. ;(

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 8 Knowledges for Ali

Rhetoric: Using Haltunga to speak powerfully
Rhetoric: Using words to illustrate love
Linguistics: Becoming more comfortable in a language
Linguistics: Mixing languages together in a conversation
Linguistics: Making adjustments to words to masculinize them

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
Remember why mages are feared.
 
Posts: 2000
Joined: Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:12 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Doctor
Renown: +390
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Player Review
Personal Journal
Letters
Medals: 39
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Shop Keeper (1) Ambassador (1) Supporter (1) Alpha Testing (1)
Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Married (1) First Kiss (1) Heartbreaker (1)
Heartbreak (1) Changed (1) Starting A Family (1) Murderer (1)
Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1) Party Animal (1)
Keep it in the Family (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Cheater (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Ellen'wyn » Sat May 19, 2018 2:51 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Food for the Expedition
City/Area: Etzos Frontier
Notes/Warnings: Just my job thread from Cylus. Pretty basic stuff.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 total
Hunting: Game can be scarce in Cylus
Hunting: Stalking prey from the air
Hunting: Signs of rabbits foraging
Hunting: Rabbits can be found in shrubland
Ranged (Shortbow): Know when you can’t make the shot
Endurance: Keep moving to stay warm
Loot: It would have long been eaten.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Ellen'wyn
Little bird, big attitude.
 
Posts: 206
Joined: Fri Oct 13, 2017 8:42 pm
Location: Etzos/Foster's Landing
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Huntress
Renown: +34
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Medals: 3
Peer Reviewer (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) First Kiss (1)

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