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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Val Valencia » Tue May 15, 2018 8:15 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: So You Think You Can Dance?
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Dance: Leaping
Dance: Basics of Improv Style
Dance: Keeping up with Tempo
Acrobatics: Back Bend
Acrobatics: Balancing on one Leg
Endurance: Holding Dance Poses
Location: Rynmere's Theater House

Loot: Extra for "The Forgotten Gift" at Rynmeres Theater House
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised knees
Renown: Maybe for becoming part of a big play?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Val Valencia
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Posts: 54
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2018 6:55 pm
Location: Rynmere
Race: Human
Profession: Dancer
Renown: +30
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Max » Wed May 16, 2018 2:03 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Little Fish in a Sea of Sharks
City/Area: The Beneath/Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: As always, language and violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Diving Away From a Strike
Acrobatics: Sliding Down a Hole
Deception: Distracting a Defier's Guardian with a Feint
Detection: Looking for an Escape
Endurance: Fighting Through Withdrawals
Resistance: Withdrawals Worsen Over Time

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Unlikely.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.
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Max
I am the storm, so wait
 
Posts: 274
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Location: Almund, Scalvoris
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: +212
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Val Valencia » Wed May 16, 2018 1:16 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Heart of Lake Krome
City/Area: Lake Krome/Krome
Notes/Warnings: Almost drowning?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Holding Ones Breath
Swimming: How to Sink
Swimming: Frog Stroke
Strength: Dragging a Net Full of Rocks
Fishing: How to Drag a Fishing Net
Acrobatics: Using Your Toes to Grip Objects

Non-skill
Location: Lake Krome
Location: Krome

Loot: 3 gold nel for the attempt of finding the necklace
A simple bronze pendant with a broken chain
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A but she lost her fishing net?
Renown: Potentially for attempting a good deed?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Val Valencia
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Posts: 54
Joined: Tue Apr 10, 2018 6:55 pm
Location: Rynmere
Race: Human
Profession: Dancer
Renown: +30
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Amaris » Wed May 16, 2018 3:34 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Let’s Get Down to Business
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Amaris 7 posts = 12 knowledges
Skill
Detection: awareness can keep you alive
Discipline: staying focused with distractors present
Endurance: taking a hit
Logistics: planning ahead
Polearm: Spear: basic stance
Polearm: Spear: lower stance for defense
Polearm: Spear: don’t let go of the weapon to protect self with hands
Polearm: Spear: loosening grip to accommodate forward movement
Polearm: Spear: proper stance for a thrust
Polearm: Spear: lunge for further reach
Polearm: Spear: coil and thrust
Tactics: foreseeing possible error

Other
Sephira: a kind teacher
Sephira: patient
Sephira: uses a saber
NPC: Curtis

Sephira 6 posts = 11 knowledges
Skill
Blades (Saber): Footwork is important during combat
Blades (Saber): A low guard stance presents a smaller target to your opponent
Blades (Saber): A downward parry can push the opponent’s weapon away from you
Blades (Saber): Adding enough force behind a parry to create an attack opening
Detection: Noticing the shift in stance before an opponent attacks
Detection: Noticing subtle hand movements that might indicate an attack
Socalization: Offering to provide training to a stranger
Tactics: Choosing a weapon that best suits your body shape
Tactics: Using your peripheral vision during combat
Tactics: Choosing the right stance before beginning combat
Tactics: Using the length of a weapon to keep an opponent at bay

Other
Amaris – Incredibly tall
Amaris – An excellent student
Amaris – Preferred to use a spear


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe some for showing up at a land troop location for the councilor, and for Sephira training said councilor
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Amaris
Sweet Summer Child of Scalvoris
 
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Yanahalqah » Wed May 16, 2018 4:02 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Comeuppance
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos area
Notes/Warnings: Torture
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intimidation: the threat of torture
Interrogation: Gleaning information through torture
Torture: The basics
Torture: practice on a spare target first to get the hang of it
Torture: Inflicting pain to force compliance
Torture: Can take a while

Renown: prolly not
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: Magic is for cheaters
"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Yanahalqah
Three-in-one
 
Posts: 546
Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2016 1:21 pm
Location: Andaris
Race: Yludih
Profession: Steward of the Iron Hand
Renown: +93
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Medals: 8
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Yanahalqah » Wed May 16, 2018 4:05 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Comeuppance part deux
City/Area: Foster's Landing, Etzos area
Notes/Warnings: Torture
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Torture: More than inflicting physical pain
Torture: sensory deprivation
Torture: mental assault
Torture: keeping the victim alive
Endurance: Keep on going while fatigued
Medicine: cauterizing wounds to prevent bleeding

Loot: information
Injuries/Overstepping: exhaustion, fatigue
Renown: prolly not
Collaboration: nope
Magic EXP: Who even uses this shit anyways?
"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Yanahalqah
Three-in-one
 
Posts: 546
Joined: Sun Jun 19, 2016 1:21 pm
Location: Andaris
Race: Yludih
Profession: Steward of the Iron Hand
Renown: +93
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Medals: 8
Painting With Words (1) Beta Bot (1) One Arc Later... (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Zevan » Thu May 17, 2018 1:11 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:Pavel Trung's Trunk of Treats or Tricks
City/Area: Bayward
Notes/Warnings: Mild language?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing behavior
Detection: Noting patterns in travel
Storytelling: Listening is as important as telling
Storytelling: Being enraptured in a tale

Slake: Works slowly over time
Slake: Inspires others to adventure

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Drunkenness?
Renown: Not yet
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: No
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Zevan
Patron Saint of Wanderers
 
Posts: 20
Joined: Sun Jan 07, 2018 10:45 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Traveler
Renown: +30
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Ela Wolfsdotter » Thu May 17, 2018 7:09 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Getting an upgrade
City/Area: Scalvoris Town and the woods surrounding
Notes/Warnings: Uh, no. Not really
Requested Rewards:
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Testing the weight
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Downward swing
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Keeping good posture
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Footwork is important
Axes and Bludgeons - Two-headed axe: Using momentum helps
Strength: Lifting a heavy weapon

Loot: A cool nickname
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nopeeee
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Ela Wolfsdotter
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Renown: +30
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Torqin » Thu May 17, 2018 5:29 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Family Reunion
City/Area: Yithiral, Ivorian Empire
Notes/Warnings: Plenty of violence + 1 PC Death

Xander
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Bladed combat (longsword): Fighting in an enclosed space
Bladed combat (longsword): Choosing an appropriate attack for your surroundings
Bladed combat (longsword): Slicing the neck offers a quick death
Bladed combat (longsword): Remember to move your feet and body too
Detection: Keeping sight on a target from afar
Detection: Watching through windows
Deception: Making use of misfortune as a cover
Deception: Faking your departure
Intelligence: Gathering first hand information
Intelligence: Misleading your target with false information
Tactics: Sometimes you don't have a plan
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes
Magic EXP: No

Torqin
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Axes & Bludgeons (Spiked Club): Blocking a swung fire poker
Axes & Bludgeons (Spiked Club): Upward swing into exposed arm pit
Intimidation: Using a feral taunt to interrupt a reluctant combatant
Running: Sprinting with a shield raised
Shielded Combat (Heater Shield): Shield Charge
Shielded Combat (Heater Shield): Upward Shield Punch
Shielded Combat (Heater Shield): Sideways Swinging shield to remove grappling enemies
Tactics: Make a shock and awe styled entrance
Tactics: Creating distance when fighting multiple enemies
Unarmed Combat (Heart of Stone): Dodging an attack while pressing in for your own

Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping:
Bruised Ribs - Should heal on own, sore for several trials.
Broken Nose - Will need set
Small Puncture in Back - Will need stitches, risk of infection
Bruising on Back - Will heal on own, sore for several trials
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes
Magic EXP: No)

Celestessa
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Acting: Like everything's alright
Baking: Adjust ratio of ingredients to counteract moist ingredients in bread
Blades (Knife): StabbingBlades (Knife): Repeated movements to increase damage
Caregiving: Speaking to your babiesCaregiving: Protecting your children
Caregiving: Reassuring someone
Deception: Pretending to be happy
Discipline: Not allowing yourself to panic in public
Discipline: Preparing yourself for a difficult evening
Seduction: Undressing to make sure they're looking.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes
Magic EXP: (/No)
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Torqin
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Posts: 62
Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2017 9:15 pm
Profession: Bodyguard
Renown: +10
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Jonathan Burr » Thu May 17, 2018 9:26 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Shape of Life
City/Area:Road to Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Aberration: Focusing ether
Aberration: Opening a conjunction
Aberration: Flaying a living creature
Aberration: Every living thing contains ether
Aberration: The Harvester as mentor, teacher, partner.
Discipline: Sneaking through a wooded area
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Jonathan Burr
 
Posts: 109
Joined: Sun Mar 11, 2018 8:01 pm
Race: Human
Renown: 0

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