Review Request 2.1.3

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Genuvah
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A New Facet
City/Area: Uleuda/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nah.
Requested Rewards: Replacing his oldest form, Aukari, with a new human one.
Knowledge:

Deception: Forging an Alter Ego
Deception: Crafting a Backstory
Detection: Warped focus to find abnormalities in two-dimensional images.
Disguise: A skewed physique
Disguise: Changing complexion
Meditation: Visualization of the goal.

Non-Skilled:

Uleuda: Meditation Chambers

Loot: Shiny new form, loses his old Aukari kid form.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 83
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Discipline: Taking Time to Practice
Discipline: The Patience to Start with the Basics
Blades (Gladius): Block
Blades (Gladius): Parry and Counter
Blades (Gladius): Importance of Solid Footwork
Blades (Gladius): Using the Hilt as a Club


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Sergeant Tantos: Unforgiving Tutor
Blackguard Academy: Takes Recruits from All Social Strata


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 88
Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Arlo Creede
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Profession: Cassion's Champion
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Like the (fat) cat that got the cream
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Combat: Blades: Longsword: Use your centre of gravity
Combat: Blades: Longsword: Use your blade to deflect a large animal
Combat: Ranged Weapon: Bow: Move slowly to avoid angering predators
Combat: Ranged Weapon: Bow: Judging how many times you can shoot requires practice.
Fieldcraft: In a blizzard, dress in layers
Navigation: Land navigation in storms is tricky.
Persuasion: Never been a cat-tree in a skeleton. This is why.
Strength: Lifting a child into a tree


Loot: 1 x silver wolf pelt + teeth
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes. Saved the cat, helped the child. Maybe 2 x 5?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Arlo

Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Attack cat works against wolves
Animal Husbandry: Rescuing cats stuck in trees
Animal Husbandry: Tone of voice matters, not words
Climbing: Fighting the wind
Climbing: Tree climbing in a blizzard
Climbing: Navigating something which bends
Fieldcraft: In a blizzard, dress in layers
Navigation: Land navigation in storms is tricky.
Persuasion: Never been a cat-tree in a skeleton. This is why.


Loot: 1 x silver wolf pelt + teeth
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Helped the girl, saved the cat, climbed the tree. Maybe 2 x 5?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Mercedes
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Joined: Sat Nov 04, 2017 2:37 am
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Profession: Sorcerer
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name:The Pathfinder
City/Area: Sweetwine woods, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A guy gets his head smashed with a rock, and Merces takes the form.
Requested Rewards: Points?
Knowledge: Anything that works, Neither poppy nor I are picky.
Loot: 1 Becoming Totem Half Ellune(Ellune + Human ) for Merces (Poppy stole something from the wagon and would like it to be a random item/items/etc reviewers choice)
Injuries/Overstepping: No injuries
Renown: Murder, Poppy, and uh... No clue?
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (Yes) Both Poppy(Attunement) and Merces(Becoming)
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word count: 91
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Vega
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Posts: 2767
Joined: Sun Jan 08, 2017 5:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Hat-Wearer
Renown: 1739
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: A Little Girl With Great Big Plans
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Gambling: Shuffling the pack
Gambling: Dealing
Gambling: Biqaj card game: Stars
Gambling: You need to practice to keep your skill
Negotiation: My pain is worse than yours.
Persuasion: Putting forward a reasonable argument.

Loot: Ledger is up to date for purchases
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: no
word count: 73
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Victor Amielle
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Joined: Wed Jul 26, 2017 3:29 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Researcher
Renown: 382
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Plagiarism
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This thread smells bad!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: Plagiarism: a serious offensive
Research: Always put your quotations in quotation marks
Research: Compiling an enumerative bibliography
Research: Funding for magical research can be hard to come by
Cooking: Making garlic paste
Disguise: Making yourself unattractive to others
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Slight (5) - People definitely noticed that smell!
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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word count: 72

Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

Items

Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Woe
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Profession: Éminence grise
Renown: 1465
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Ring of Lashes
City/Area: Augiery
Notes/Warnings: Violence, dirty fighting, crotch shots, biting, etc.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Endurance: Recovering from a tackle
Endurance: Surviving a bearhug
Endurance: Taking a shot to the crotch
Sociology: Meritocracy of the Slave Pits
Tactics: Lowering your value as a target
Tactics: Staying out of range until ready to fight
Unarmed Combat(Striking): No arms? no legs? headbutt!
Unarmed Combat(grappling): Exploiting an opening
Unarmed Combat(grappling): Striking while in very close quarters
Unarmed Combat(grappling): Using leverage to pop a joint out of its socket
Unarmed Combat(Striking): Attacking nerve endings to increase pain

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Beaten up, bruised, concussion, maybe a broken rib.
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rorom
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Joined: Tue Sep 06, 2016 10:54 pm
Race: Biqaj
Profession: Captain
Renown: 255
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
PC Name: Rorom
Thread Name: Chrien testing, U'frek approved.
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards: (Dunno since it's abandoned, kinda.) 1517 words for me.
Knowledge:

Storytelling: Recounting an experience
Storytelling: Discussing the way stories change over time
Socialization: Making the first impression
Socialization: Establishing common ground
Fishing: Fishing nets take much work to craft
Meditation: Prayer soothes the grief of a loss

Non-skill knowledge:

PC: Moiran, an Biqaj Priestess
Pc: Moiran, Tells good stories
PC: Moiran, Wise beyond her years

U'frek: Fished mankind from their deaths.
Chrien: Immortal of Storms occupies a space in U'frek's temple
U'Frek and Chrien: Linked through their struggle against the other.
Location: Northern Wing of the Temple of Ne'haer
Location: Altar of Chrien and U'Frek

Loot: Disposed of a broken fishing net.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: +3 for visiting U'frek's temple to make an appropriate offering.
Collaboration: Yes, but unfinished/abandoned
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested
PC Name: Moiran
Thread Name: Chrien testing, U'frek approved.
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards: Again, not sure. She wrote 607
Knowledge:

Storytelling: Framing a story well
Storytelling: Lending personal experience to your story.
Socialization: Bonding your own personal experience to another's misfortune.
Socialization: Making a good impression.

Non-Skill Knowledge:

PC: Rorom; an honest sailor and fisherman
PC: Rorom; an ignorant devotee of U'Frek and Chrien

Location: Northern Wing of the Temple of Ne'haer
Location: Altar of Chrien and U'Frek

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: 5 for spreading knowledge of the gods to someone curious about the Immortals.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 283
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Arlo Creede
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Profession: Cassion's Champion
Renown: 820
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Life After Death
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Forcing yourself not to look at your mangled legs
Discipline Focus on the practical to avoid looking at your emotions
Discipline: Calming yourself down when furious
Endurance: Putting up with pain rather than making yourself drowsy
Endurance: Pain-related nausea


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: NA in this thread
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Arlo

Knowledge:
Caregiving: How to not make someone more worried
Caregiving: Remain positive to help healing
Caregiving: Point out beneficial side effects
Detection: Hearing someone engaged in prayer
Discipline Focus on the practical to avoid looking at your emotions
Discipline: Keeping hold of your temper as much as possible.
Negotiation: State clearly when something is out of the question

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Not in this thread.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 148
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Tio Silver
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Posts: 1273
Joined: Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:04 pm
Race: Immortal
Profession: God of Curses
Renown: 665
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Here Comes the Boom!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence against wolves.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Banshee Powder
Alchemy: Using Yellow Dragon Wood in alchemy
Alchemy: Using Wraithgrass in alchemy
Alchemy: The quieting property of Wraithgrass
Alchemy: How to make magical gunpowder
Chemistry: Yellow Dragon Charchol


Loot:
-100gn
9 x 10lb bag of Banshee Powder (Gunpowder alchemically enhanced to be a little stronger and quieter)
Bag of Smoke Bombs

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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