Review Requests 2.1.5

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: To Prey on Mantis: Part Three
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Eh, just ideas for the future

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Detection: Using sound traps to detect
Detection: Observing from an outpost
Detection: Hiding whilst observing is useful for better perception
Tactics: Countering mage hunters by not relying on magic
Tactics: Spreading out strengths so as to minimize weaknesses
Tactics: Those on the verge of extinction must collectivize and grow in strength

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe slight, since Ren is admiring him and learned of his massacre of a victory.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Doran Cooney

[Ela Wolfsdotter]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: New Life Brings New Death
City/Area: Scalvoris, just outside Scalv Town
Notes/Warnings: Fairly graphic in some parts
Requested Rewards:
Axes and Bludgeons - Two Handed Axe: Shattering ribs
Axes and Bludgeons - Two Handed Axe: Overhead strike
Axes and Bludgeons - Two Handed Axe: Rushing with an Axe
Axes and Bludgeons - Two Handed Axe: Striking the shoulder
Unarmed Combat: Tearing apart a body
Unarmed Combat: Ripping flesh with fangs
A pouch of gold nels (Reviewer Discretion to how many, but a decent amount please Nothing over 100 of course)
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor injuries, nothing lasting
Renown: Somewhat like 10 or 15? I feel like this would leave a lasting effect on Scalvoris people
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope

Doran Cooney

[Ko Ko]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Reinhardt's Rage
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Slightly suggestive/tastefully descriptive.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Some general ideas.
1. Reading
2. Endurance
3. Seduction
4. Business Management
5. Zihida Reinhardt: revenue matters above all
6. Aukari: not good for business

Loot:
None.

Injuries/Overstepping:
1. Welt/scratches on her upper back.
2. Perhaps a headache from getting slapped full force.

Renown: This is up to you.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Doran Cooney

[Oberan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Humanity Inside
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
none

Collaboration: no

Doran Cooney

[Oberan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Humanity Inside 2
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
none

Collaboration: No's

Doran Cooney

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Investing in Industry
City/Area: Northern Hyran (Acadia)
Notes/Warnings: Mostly narrative rambles.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Business Management: Investing in infrastructure
Business Management: Funding a new industry
Business Management: Interest revenue
Business Management: Investment royalties
Business Management: Organizing an external operation
Leadership: Mages and men must live collaboratively

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: I would like to ask for Large (20) Renown. Alistair is investing nearly 20,000 gold and employing tons of people, pulling out downtrodden and unemployed individuals and giving them new homes and opportunities, in a new land that he holds dominion over. I'll be submitting this as an impact thread.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Doran Cooney

[Alistair]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: To Bleed the Head of a Bastard
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Bit gross. Job thread

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Medicine: Rockmaze Moss Powder
Medicine: Mixing liquids with a batter to help them go down
Medicine: Beating a powder into a mixture
Medicine: Mixing two salves into one
Medicine: Dealing with serious blunt head trauma
Business Management: Emergency visits for extra revenue

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small? (+10) For saving a child's life, and other small good deeds throughout the thread (like offering to deal with the gang, offering fighting lessons, taking in an emergency patient)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Doran Cooney

[Maebella]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: One Does Not Simply Meditate
City/Area: Fitness Centre, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nope!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Skill
  • Discipline: Focusing the mind
  • Etiquette: Thank someone for teaching you
  • Intelligence: Questioning someone's origins
  • Meditation: Good posture is important
  • Meditation: Seated stance
  • Meditation: Focus on natural bodily functions
• Non-skill
  • Location (Viden): Viden Academy Fitness Centre
  • Lida'via (NPC): Meditation Instructor
  • Lida'via (NPC): Sev'ryn
  • Menochoros: Martial Art
  • Menochoros: Meditation is beneficial

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Renown: No.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

Doran Cooney

[Nightshade Eld]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Laying the Pieces
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Buisness Management: Leaving someone trustworthy in charge
Buisness Management: Detailed Instructions
Buisness Management: Backup plans
Buisness Management: Not trusting all of your employees
Business Management: The difference between working 'with' and 'for'
Deception: Making people think you're still in town

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A

Doran Cooney

[Nightshade Eld]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Expedition of the Scout
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Drawing: Nib varity
Intelligence: A rough idea of the Scalvoris map
Intelligence: Pirate lords and their disappearance
Intelligence: Gossip is typically a bad source of information
Linguistics: Writing understandably
Writing: Calligraphy

Loot: Scribe's Kit. First aid kit. 40gn base price, Night gets a 20% renown based price drop for 32gn in total.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A

Doran Cooney