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Alistair
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Review Requests 2.1.4

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Thread Name: Such Portal, Much Wow
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Cuteness

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 12 knowledges each

Alistair:
Rupturing: Picking the right location
Strength: Suspending a man by his waist using your forearms
Discipline: Trying not to cry
Discipline: Failing to hold back your emotions
Detection: Noticing someone else's suspicions
Negotiation: A promise for a promise
Negotiation: Upholding a vow
Psychology: Letting it all go to heal
Persuasion: Convincing someone by using beauty
Persuasion: Being honest about magic can dispel mistruths
Socialization: Using metaphors to charm
Socialization: Displaying emotions can help forge trust

Doran: I Love Him
Doran: Taught me to embrace my sorrow
Fridgar: Should be mourned, not erased
Location: The Meadow of Sunflowers

Doran:
Acrobatics: Wrapping One’s Legs Around a Body to Keep from Falling
Endurance: Invigorating Yourself With a Bath
Endurance: Good Company Can Help with General Weariness
Endurance: Pushing Past Fear to Accomplish a Task
Endurance: Sitting Down to Deal with Dizziness
Rupturing: The Process of Creating Portals
Rupturing: Portals Must Have an Entrance and Exit
Rupturing: A Portal’s Appearance Depends on the Ruputurer
Rupturing: A Visual Magic
Rupturing: The Possible Effects of Stepping Through a Portal
Strength: Supporting Your Weight by Wrapping Your Legs Around When Being Carried
Unarmed Combat: Open Handed Slap

Alistair: Possesses Emotional Severance Magic
Location: The Sunflower Meadow

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Alistair on Sun May 20, 2018 2:55 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 236
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Rynata
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Thread Name: Swash and Buckle
City/Area: Surrounding Waters of Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: I'd like some feedback on the fact that there were a lot of characters introduced in quick succession. That's usually confusing and I don't like it personally as well, so let me know if how confusing or unconfusing it was. As always, any other thoughts would be welcome as well.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Tactics: Using a net to subdue
Tactics: Cheat better than your opponent
Tactics: Knocking your enemy back by swinging down from above
Cutlass: Feinting
Climbing: Climbing the ratlines
Swimming: Kicking back to the surface

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Andres Qy'Ufnaj: Father
Aren Qy'Ufnaj: Mother
Ramsey Qy'Ufnaj: Eldest brother
Anton Qy'Ufnaj: Older brother
Korim Qy'Ufnaj: Older brother

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Mercedes
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Thread Name:Darkness And Destruction
City/Area: Egilrun, Slags Deep Level 7 The Beneath, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language, Some Violence, Mercedes gets a becoming lesson from an ithecal
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Can become more than just mammals
Becoming: Transformations are painful
Becoming: Totem Crafting(Aye-aye)
Becoming: Decaying totems result in poor transformations
Becoming: Without the totem of self you are stuck
Unarmed combat: Combination attacks are proficient

Non Skill Knowledge
Ran'dar: Ithecal
Ran'dar: I owe a debt to
Ran'dar: Knowledgeable about domain magic

Loot: 1x Aye Aye Rat Totem, A large amount of Debt to this NPC
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruising/Cuts/Scarring to Mercedes Back
Renown: Don't think it applies here.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Last edited by Mercedes on Sun May 13, 2018 2:35 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 124
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Qit'ria
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Thread Name: Shimfin Flamflam Whimwhom
City/Area: Scalvoris Town Docks, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Super mild sexual undertones and animal violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Becoming Form: Ganditlip/Shimfin
Hunting: Ganditlip kill
Polearms (Spear): Underwater thrust
Swimming: Arms in front of you to streamline
Swimming: Ganditlip kick style
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Hit them in the nose

Loot: Ganditlip Nose Shortsword - Ganditlip Totem
Injuries/Overstepping: Mild stab to high stomach
Renown: 5 for helping stupid fishermen
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No*, technically yes, but not enough to warrant exp gain)
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Pepper
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Race: Mixed Race
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Thread Name: Threading the needle
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Job thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
  • Needlecraft : Measure twice, cut once
  • Needlecraft : Marking the fabric allows you to not waste fabric
  • Needlecraft : Basting stitch
  • Needlecraft : Running stitch
  • Design : examining finished product can help you understand the plans
  • Discipline : Concentrating on tedious tasks
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Amaris
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Thread Name: The Weight of Living
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill
Endurance: living with survivor’s remorse
Psychology: the weight of living
Psychology: near physical manifestation of guilt

Other
NPC: Trey Arnold

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 55
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Rooftops
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Some crude language

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 12 knowledges Ali, 12 for Jon

Alistair:
Running: Running jumps
Running: Jumping from a sprint early can lead to consequences
Running: Spraining your ankle due to running
Running: Traction
Running: Using traction to retain bursts of speed
Running: Human legs can only perform traction so well
Climbing: Can be used in tandem with acrobatics
Climbing: Can benefit parkour
Climbing: Jumping from ledges
Climbing: Leading into the next ledge
Climbing: Climbing a flat-topped roof
Climbing: It's difficult to climb structures with wide gaps between ledges

Jonathan:
Endurance: Staying with it even when you're tired.
Endurance: Never give up
Endurance: Recovering from a long run
Endurance: knowing when to rest.
Discipline: Staying free from your addiction.
Discipline: throwing away an addictive substance
Discipline: choosing not to have help.
Running: Running along rooftops
Running: executing jumps across barriers
Running: using obstacles
Acrobatics: Learning how to fall properly
Acrobatics: rolling out of a fall into a standing position

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Small maybe, for being the crazy kids doing sports on rooftops?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Surprisingly, yes, for both. Ali used a lot of magic here, and Jon did what he could for his level, lol
word count: 216
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Mercedes
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Thread Name: Fighting Blind
City/Area: Egilrun, Slags Deep Level 7 The Beneath, Scalvoris.
Notes/Warnings: Strong language, Mild violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Channeling ether into totems
Becoming: Moment of Nothingness in between transformations
Becoming: Takes time to get used to forms
Becoming: Gives the becomer animal senses
Becoming: Some totems have weaknesses
Unarmed Combat(Brawling): Latch onto the opponent
Non Skill Knowledge
Ran'dar: Very powerful combatant
Slags Deep: Has Seven Levels
Slags Deep: The beneath is incredibly dark
Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: As I'd imagine that doesn't apply here
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Last edited by Mercedes on Thu May 17, 2018 12:59 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 104
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Kasoria
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Thread Name: The Call of The Void
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Some Foul Language

This was supposed to be a collab, but since Navyri went AWOL, I went ahead and wrapped it up. A killer needs his potions, after all...

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Detection: Deducing When Something was Prepared By the Freshness of Its Remains in a Container
Intelligence: Asking Discreet Questions (Backed up by a Little Coin)
Negotiation: Having your Counter-Offer Prepared in Advance
Negotiation: Paying Above the Rate
Psychology: Men Trapped by Debt and Vices are Easy to Manipulate (Especially with Money)
Tactics: Rely on Yourself and Your Weapons, Not the Poison


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Bernie's Comb, Etzos Underground
NPC Randolf: Healer by Trade, Also Versed in Poisons


Loot: Just what was purchased
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Not really, but Navyri got one post in
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kasoria on Mon May 21, 2018 12:29 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 150
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Aur'ren
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Thread Name:The Darkness At Sea
City/Area: In Between Andaris, and Viden at sea.
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Tactics: Run, Hide, Fight
Tactics: The Environment can provide advantages
Tactics: Plan for what is to come next
Tactics: Predicting The Enemies Next Move
Tactics: Strike when the enemy least expects it
Logistics: Organizing an escape route
Non Skill Knowledge
U'frek: Immortal of the seas
U'frek: Hunts Down Mer
U'frek: My Lord
Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: N/a
Renown: Maybe a Medium for saving the lives of his crew?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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