Review Requests 2.1.4

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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Pegasus » Tue Apr 10, 2018 11:11 am

Peer Review Requests
PLEASE DON'T EDIT OR REMOVE REVIEW REQUESTS.

Standing Trials has entered a new way of reviewing threads. Examples of requested grades from the beta testing can be found here.

Review System Information Guide


Standing Trials TOU: You should, at minimum, be posting 250 words per post.

Threads: Each player must write at minimum 1500 per thread.

Solos: You may choose 6 Skill Knowledge from your thread. For every post made after the first page, you gain an additional skill knowledge for a maximum of 15 total skill knowledge. Auto 10 points upon completion no matter what.

Collaboration Threads: You may choose 8 Skill Knowledge from your thread after you've made a total of 3 posts. For every post made after that, you gain an additional skill knowledge. Auto 15 points upon completion no matter what.

Moderated Threads: Final rewards are up to the moderator's discretion.

Overall, moderators and peer reviewers have the right to deny or modify knowledge given if they feel you're attempting to abuse the system. If claiming maximum numbers of knowledge, players may not dump the entirety of their skill knowledge into one skill.

Any participant of a thread may submit for their own rewards. However, as long as you get permission from all participants within the thread, you may also request for your partner(s) rewards as well. Please indicate that you received approval from your partner to post their rewards for them in your request.


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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Kasoria » Tue Apr 10, 2018 12:58 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: V. Thanam O’n Dhoul
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Bad Language, Lil' Bit of Violence

The finale! Hope you enjoy, it's all really been building to this!

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Blades (Gladius): "The Iugulatio" (Execution Strike)
Discipline: Waiting Until Dismissed
Intelligence: Putting Together Clues
Medicine: Checking Life Signs at the Neck, Wrist, and Mouth
Persuasion: Offering a Painless Option
Poisons: Scarf Rot, Soaked into a Euphoria Stick


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Vorund: Punishment is Certain, For Someone
Etzos, Ashan, 718: City Overrun By Blackguard and Army


Loot: +1000gn, the agreed contract fee
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Maybe
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Rynata » Wed Apr 11, 2018 8:04 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Customer is Sometimes Right
City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund
Notes/Warnings: Just a job thread
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge
Navigation: Following the coastline
Seafaring: The passenger limit of a sloop
Negotiation: Know what is valuable to the other
Business Management: Keeping the customer happy
Business Management: Remain professional
Persuasion: Presenting reasonable arguments

Non Skill Knowledge
Location: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Don't think so
Collaboration: Np
Magic EXP: No
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Kasoria » Wed Apr 11, 2018 10:19 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bigger Fish
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Fouler Violence

Requested Rewards:

Kasoria

Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Acting: Playing the Doddery Street Addict
Blades (Gladius): Drawing and Striking in the Same Movement
Blades (Gladius): Disarming a Swordsman (By Taking His Hand Off)
Deception: Bluffing Your Way Through The Door By Rambling On and On
Discipline: Quieting Yourself to Take Stock of Your Surroundings
Endurance: Rage That Gives Killers Strength
Intimidation: Reminding a Small Fry Just How Small He Really Is
Tactics: Distracting a Target With an Unexpected Event
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Kick to the Knee
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Slamming Heads Into Hard Objects
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Finger Lock


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Vorund: Taxes Every Criminal Business in South Etzos
NPC Vorund: Doesn't Carelessly Throw His Assets Away
NPC Vorund: Has Numerous Legitimate Investments
NPC Randolf: Disgraced Doctor, Back-Alley Healer, Chronic Gambler
PC Finn O'Connor: Has a Sweetheart In Betty?
The Rues: Upstart Gang in South Etzos


Finnegan O'Connor

Running: hasting to make a timely delivery.
Unarmed combat: shrugging grabby hands off
Running: bolting past Juvie
Strength: shouldering a door open
Caregiving: providing first aid regardless of risk or reward
Endurance: being buried under Mr. Wattle's weight
Strength: freeing self from being buried under Mr. Wattle.
Acting: putting up a facade to cover hiding a letter
Medicine: using a shirt as an improvised bandage
Medicine: administering ammonic anesthesia
Endurance: walking long distances through the Zi'da cold
Strength: serving as a crutch

Silvester (NPC): Boss of The Rues
Betty (NPC): Like a sister
Juvie (NPC): A 'spotter'
Juvie (NPC): Smarmy know-it-all
Mr. Wattle (NPC): Overweight crook
Mr. Wattle (NPC): Tries to tempt you with reward
Mr. Wattle (NPC): Vorund's Enemy
Kasoria: savage killer
Kasoria: partner in crime
Kasoria: Vorund's right-hand man
Mr. Vorund (NPC): Kasoria's Boss
Mr. Vorund (NPC): A very angry man
Mr. Vorund (NPC): Hardened criminal

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: Oh yes indeedy! Once word gets around about Kas' wrecking ball impersonation...
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Woe » Thu Apr 12, 2018 8:01 am

Rewards Requested
I suspect Doran will contact whoever takes this thread to grade his rewards, if he wants any other than the points.
Thread Name: Playing to the Deaf
City/Area: Rynmere, Andaris, Lowtown
Notes/Warnings: I don't think so.
Requested Rewards: 15 points
Knowledge:
Deception: Explaining suspicious property
Deception: Evasive Speech to avoid unpleasant topics
Discipline: Obeying the hierarchy of individuals within one's circle.
Discipline: Respecting your betters.
Psychology: Self-reflection leading to greater understanding.
Psychology: Past events should remain in the past
Psychology: Born slaves are naive to the greater world outside captivity.
Psychology: Examining Personal Perspective.
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Postby Arlo Creede » Thu Apr 12, 2018 1:31 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Things that go bump in the night
City/Area: The Hollow Sea
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Ranged Combat: Bow: Firing while seated
Ranged Combat: Bow: Firing in the dark
Ranged Combat: Bow: Using Nalos ability to make a tricky shot
Gambling: Stars: Rules of Exchange
Gambling: Stars: Blocking your opponent
Gambling: Stars: A half gambit
Nalos Ability: Shooting Star: Provides a means of aiming
Nalos Ability: Shooting Star: Works well at a distance
Strength: Pulling your own body weight while laying down.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: I guess yes? Killing pirates!
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Arlo

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Leaping during combat
Acrobatics: Twisting half somersault
Acrobatics: Pushing with your legs for maximum aerial momentum
Acrobatics: Swinging on a rope to gain momentum
Blades: Sword: Use height to your advantage
Blades: Sword: Throat slice, mid air
Blades: Sword: Timing your strike not to hit who you're protecting
Unarmed combat: Flying roundhouse kick
Unarmed combat: Sucker punch for surprise

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Yes. Killing pirates in two places.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Arlo Creede » Thu Apr 12, 2018 2:14 pm

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Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Stepping Out
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Not staring
Navigation: Using a street map
Navigation: Asking for directions
Psychology: The overwhelming nature of physical pain
Psychology: In a partnership, what happens to one affects both
Psychology: Promising to look after yourself is reassuring to your SO.
Psychology: The importance of physical touch and proximity.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: I suspect yes.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Arlo

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Hopping over a sweep
Acting: Health Inspector Arlo!
Acting: Quick improvisation can be difficult to be realistic
Discipline: Force yourself to think quick
Discipline: Stop your mind wandering
Investigation: Spotting weaknesses in a storefront technique that don't quite add up
Investigation: Putting together clues to lead to an inescapable conclusion.
Navigation: Using a street map
Navigation: Finding specific locations in a new place

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Yes.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


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Renown: +323
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Medals: 10
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Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Max » Thu Apr 12, 2018 4:07 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Rumble in the Dark
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence and language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Max:
Intimidation: Name Calling
Intimidation: Breaking Down Egos
Intimidation: Inviting an Enemy to Try to Make Good on Their Threat
Endurance: Fighting Through a Crossfade
Endurance: Tired Muscles
Endurance: Taking a Throw to the Ground
Unarmed Combat: Protecting Your Head with Your Forearm
Unarmed Combat: Throwing an Enemy off Top Mount
Unarmed Combat: Hook to the Temple
Unarmed Combat: Headbutt
Unarmed Combat: Dropping Your Weight to Keep from being Taken Down
Unarmed Combat: Bashing Their Head off the Ground

Lavana:
Unarmed; Kick to the solar plexus
Unarmed; Right Cross Counter
Unarmed; Kick To The Knee
Endurance; Taking A Stomach Blow
Seduction; Jacadon Kiss
Resistance; Smoking Bug Berries
Strength; Breaking A Mans Ribs
Acrobatics; Elastic Recoil
Tactics; Speaking Without Saying
Tactics; Buying Time

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Various bruises, etc.
Renown: Slight or small for fighting in the street/beating The Kennel's Hounds
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Khama » Fri Apr 13, 2018 11:23 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: even the rain can't wash away the dust
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: A nice quick jaunt through the budding alcoholism of Khama. Vomit ensues.
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge (6 max)
Discipline: Combating the craving
Discipline: Forced celibacy
Endurance: Withstanding the cold while wet
Endurance: Battling a hangover
Medicine: Water helps hangovers
Resistance: Resisting the feel of alcohol



Non Skill Knowledge
Eddore: Next door neightbour
Eddore: Fixed your roof

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Don't think so
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Renown: -30
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Review Requests 2.1.4

Postby Amaris » Fri Apr 13, 2018 3:04 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Rescuing Pigeons from a Cat
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Some mentions of gore, projectile vomiting
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Amaris
Animal training: allowing your cats to wander within sight outdoors
Caretaking: Getting a panicked patient to calm down
Discipline: trying to stay calm in a stressful situation
Endurance: not screaming when faced with a murderer and a strange creature in your living room
Etiquette: not vomiting on patients
Investigation: getting information from others through calm questioning
Medicine: treating frostbite with warm water
Medicine: elevating a patient
Medicine: stabilizing muscle of the ankle
Medicine: location of the femoral artery
Negotiation: pleading for your life
Strength: dragging someone up stairs
Strength: carrying a partly frozen torso
Tactics: figuring out means of escape
Other
Volker: a murderer
Volker: a cannibal?
Volker: knows quite a bit about anatomy
Volker: didn’t kill them
Oor: Volker’s strange companion
Oor: a spirit?


Volker
Skill
Butchery: Lieutenant Dan, you ain’t got no legs!
Stealth: Breaking and entering
Intimidation: Don’t you scream
Torture: Shock eliminates pain
Torture: it’s not always physical...
Blades: targeting tendons
Etiquette: clean up your messes
Strength: hauling someone to their room
Medicine: location of muscles
Socialization: making casual conversation while cleaning up a murder
Other
Amaris: giraffe-legged beauty
Amaris: owns a large amount of cats
Amaris: seems like a promising student

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Amaris may be a bit bruised from their fall and some trauma from the whole event
Renown: some for Volker and Amaris, as they both respectively performed bad and good deeds in the presence of the other and Amaris alerted authorities of Volker’s activities.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Just a note - this thread has been submitted as an impact thread. I spoke to Volker, and this was the amount of knowledges they wanted, but I added a few more for them.

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