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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Noth » Tue Feb 06, 2018 1:51 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Cursed Caravans
City/Area: Etzos Outskirts
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Not terribly vivid.
Requested Rewards:


Ryder
Knowledge:
Unarmed: Caving in a head
Unarmed: Repeated strikes cause mass damage
Unarmed: Tackling to the floor
Strength: The Weight of a body
Leadership: Moving Others to act to save lives
Leadership: Maintaining confidence in the face of fear
Endurance: Ignoring pain in a fight
Endurance: Withstanding a writhing undead

Loot: Acceptance into the coolest club around.
Injuries/Overstepping: Light bruising, cuts.
Fame: Negative. -10 for Joining Al'Angyryl, -5 for allowing an ally to die



Noth

Knowledge:
Unarmed: Reversing a Knife
Unarmed: Clamp on a Hand to Prevent Attack
Ranged: Best before a Fight
Ranged: Targeting Officers
Ranged: Striking from Behind
Intimidation: Slaying with a Person's Own Weapon

Loot:
+3 new recruits to A'A
+ caravan loot (trade goods, coins, etc) equaling X amount of gold nels
+ X number of armor sets and weapons

Injuries: N/A
Fame: Negative. -15 for Forcibly Recruiting Caravan Survivors/Slaughtering a Caravan

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Neronin » Tue Feb 06, 2018 3:42 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Tracking Tabard
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Spying on friends
Rupturing: Tiny Scrying portals for eaves-dropping
Intelligence: Linked thralls cant hear through windows
Intelligence: Magic can aid in eavesdropping
Intelligence: Deciphering Overheard information
Intelligence: Tracking a mark
NPC: Approgate the Merchant
NPC: Approgate a partner of Tabard

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None, just cold as hell
Fame: if applicable, dont think so.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes, Rupturing


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Renown: +175
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Arlo Creede » Tue Feb 06, 2018 3:57 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Pistachio Pirates
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge:
Blades: Longsword: Using practice weapons for safety
Blades: Longsword: Testing the weight of a weapon before use
Blades: Longsword: Ready stance for duelling
Blades: Longsword: Moving the blade from your wrist
Cosmetology: What you wear under an outfit makes a different to how it looks
Dance: Utilise a dance move to step away in combat
Negotiation: An appropriate truce
Tactics: Consider the necessary outcome

Loot: Money deducted. 1 x pirate outfit and 1 x practice sword gained
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes




Arlo

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Use acrobatic moves with the sword
Acrobatics: Lunging forward
Blades: Longsword: Using practice weapons for safety
Blades: Longsword: Testing the weight of a weapon before use
Blades: Longsword: Ready stance for duelling
Blade: Longsword: Hit another sword away tip-to-tip
Blades: Longsword: Aim for the hip.
Tactics: Get your opponent to strike first

Loot: Money deducted. 1 x pirate outfit and 1 x practice sword gained
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Neronin » Tue Feb 06, 2018 4:03 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Through the Crow’s Eyes
City/Area: On the road outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence observed
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Using ravens as spies
Intelligence: Using Scrying to feed information
Rupture: Scrying
Rupture: Scrying portals are too small to travel through
Rupture: Scrying portals don’t make a noise
Necromancy: Link can be used for intelligence gathering

Loot: Everything looted can fall under Al’Angyryl seasonal income and shouldn’t be noted as extra items.
Injuries/Overstepping: Mild overstepping returning in headaches and eye sensitivity 2 trials
Fame: -2 use of magic, maybe more depending on reviewer
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes, Rupturing


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Renown: +175
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Medals: 7
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Pioneer (1) Murderer (1) Survivor (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Qit'ria » Tue Feb 06, 2018 5:03 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Chase is On
City/Area: Scalvoris, Sweetvine Woods
Notes/Warnings: Very mild ew-ness
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Creating diversion paths
Climbing: If you have a tail, use it for balance
Endurance: The frigid chill of being surrounded by snow
Becoming: Returning back to Sev'ryn form
Becoming: Can cause nausea
Becoming: Can cause headaches

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Overstepping induced nausea and headaches
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (Yes, but I don't feel it pushed the magic enough to gain exp)


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kayleigh » Wed Feb 07, 2018 3:25 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: There's Music in the Air
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Been a while, figured might as well submit it for review.
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Instrument (Harp): Composing Songs From Actual Events
  • Instrument (Harp): Ambient Music For Tunes
  • Instrument (Harp): Playing For A Crowd
  • Singing: Appealing To The Masses
  • Singing: Matching Tones With Others
  • Singing: Rhyming Words With Tunes

Generic
  • Song: Ballad of Heroes

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Street Busking?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Race: Human
Profession: Singer, Wanderer
Renown: +49
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Medals: 3
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Ryder » Wed Feb 07, 2018 6:11 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A lot to learn
City/Area: Etzos, A'A Underground
Notes/Warnings: Violence, but not graphic, so should be all good
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Longsword: Basic parrying
Longsword: Keeping a range advantage
Longsword: Footing is important
Longsword: Keeping a firm grip
Longsword: How to disarm
Leadership: Being merciful

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A (Might be wrong)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Ryder » Wed Feb 07, 2018 6:13 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Perfecting Form
City/Area: Etzos, A'A Underground
Notes/Warnings: Cursing
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength: Keep good form
Strength: Lifting heavy loads
Strength: Pull-ups
Strength: Using your whole body
Strength: Using bodyweight to train
Endurance: Pushing to the limit

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Muscles recovering from the workout
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Ryder » Wed Feb 07, 2018 6:17 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Best Defense
City/Area: Etzos, A'A Underground
Notes/Warnings: Cursing
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Longsword: Defensive stance
Longsword: Baiting an attack
Longsword: Examining enemy movements
Longsword: Basic blocks
Longsword: Dodge and strike
Discipline: Following instructions

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Ryder » Wed Feb 07, 2018 6:26 am

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Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Booze and Brawls
City/Area: Etzos, The Broken Blade
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Cursing
Requested Rewards:
Unarmed: Hitting by surprise
Unarmed: Slamming a head against a table
Unarmed: Swinging sloppily can mean injury
Unarmed: Restraining a man
Unarmed: Kneeing in the stomach
Strength: Using your full force

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Knuckle injury
Fame: Not sure if positive (cos they like bar fights) or negative (bar fight) - reviewers discretion.
Collaboration: No
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Profession: Mercenary
Renown: +70
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Medals: 1
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