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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Qit'ria » Thu Jan 25, 2018 3:28 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Waste Not, Want Not
City/Area: Scalvoris, Sweetvine Woods
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Sculpting: Carving small bones with a knife
Meditation: Listen to your heart
Jewelry Crafting: Making a hide bracelet
Jewelry Crafting: Adding charms to a bracelet
Becoming: Empowering a Totem
Becoming: Feeling when a Totem is powered

Loot: +1 Aye-Aye Mouse Totem
Injuries/Overstepping: Used magic, but no overstepping (yet)
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (Yes, Becoming)

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Pash Raj'oriq » Thu Jan 25, 2018 4:19 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: One more for the road, an encore
City/Area: Cally's, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nah.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (6):
Meditation: Imagining the journey ahead in your mind
Meditation: Traveling through musical expression
Lute: Tuning a glass lute
Lute: Learning sounds of a glass lute
Lute: Finding the music that suits the instrument
Socialization: Empathy and the emotions of an entire crowd

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Positive, please! Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Not enough to warrant points.

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Medals: 17
Story of the Month (1) Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1)
Painting With Words (1) Mentor (1) Ambassador (1) Review Master (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) First Kiss (1) Shopaholic (1)
History Repeated (1) Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1) Event Medal (2)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nir'wei » Thu Jan 25, 2018 8:11 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Another Day In Andaris.
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: Should probably only be reviewed by a Storyteller, Developer or Advocate.
Requested Rewards:
Nir'wei Knowledge:
Linguistics: Andaris accents are different from that of other regions of Rynmere.
Linguistics: Universally-understood signs can convey a wide range of phrases and directions.
Negotiation: Sometimes, there's a time to take the first offer.
Negotiation: Unreasonably high offers are made with the intention of bartering.
Endurance: Surviving being thrown onto your ass.
Detection: Picking out particular weather patterns.
Detection: Following what others are watching.
Detection: Selecting high-profile targets from large crowds.

Faith Knowledge: None

Dalaine, Kieran, Tristan Knowledge: PM for response?

Nir'wei Loot: Charm of Ziell. Effect unknown.
Tristan: Ring of Ziell. Effect unknown.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Whatever fits.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

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Medals: 10
Story of the Month (1) Painting With Words (1) Mentor (1) Beta Bot (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Right In The Feels (2) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Max » Fri Jan 26, 2018 4:15 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Buggin' Out
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Don't do drugs, kids.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Continuing Despite Troublesome Thoughts
Endurance: Ignoring Skewed Vitals
Intimidation: Holding Sword Hilt to Deter Criminals
Navigation: Traveling Streets While High
Resistance: Building Tolerance to Bug Berries
Resistance: Combating a Bad High with Peppercorn

Bug Berries: Illegal for Recreation
Bug Berries: Gets You High

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative for doing drugs maybe?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Location: Almund, Scalvoris
Race: Mixed Race
Renown: +242
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Medals: 4
Painting With Words (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Murderer (1) Survivor (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Qit'ria » Fri Jan 26, 2018 4:22 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: No Pain, No Gain
City/Area: Scalvoris, Sweetvine Woods
Notes/Warnings: A bit of descriptor of pain and such during a Becoming.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Becoming: Thinking small to Become a small form
Endurance: The pain associated with compressing and shrinking
Becoming: Changing skin to furry skin
Discipline: Focusing on your form through the pain of Becoming
Becoming: Extending your spine to create a tail
Becoming Form: Aye-Aye Mouse

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (/No)
Magic EXP: (Yes Becoming)


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Renown: +38
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Medals: 8
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Mentor (1) Supporter (1)
Review Master (1) Pioneer (1) Enemy of My Enemy (1) Lol Worthy (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Faith » Fri Jan 26, 2018 8:40 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Off the Beaten Track
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: It ends rather abruptly.
Requested Rewards:


Faith

Knowledge: (5 posts = 10 knowledge)
None.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes



Maebella

Knowledge: (5 posts = 10 knowledge max)
Research: Choosing sources
Medicine: Heavy lifting is bad for pregnant women
Leadership: Taking control
Logistics: Planning ahead
Strength: Bend the knees, not the back when setting down heavy objects
Intimidation: How to reduce height so others AREN'T uncomfortable
Detection: Spotting signs of exhaustion
Detection: Spotting genuine interest
Research: The more people involved, the faster information can be gathered
Research: Prioritising sources

Non-skill
Faith: From Scalvoris
Faith: Professor of Medicine in Scalvoris
Faith: Has a Charter in Medicine
Faith: Surprisingly young
Faith: Marked by Famula, Vri and Moseke
Faith: Devoted to her husband, Padraig Loot: Nope

Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Positive for helping?
Collaboration: Yes


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Character of the Month (1) Contributor of the Month (1) Story of the Month (1) World Developer (1)
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Shop Keeper (1) Mentor (1) Ambassador (1)
Supporter (1) Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Ascension (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (4)
Hoarder (1) ...ow. (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (2) True Love (1) Married (1) Changed (1)
Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Arlo Creede » Fri Jan 26, 2018 9:47 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Pregnant Glow... of Feathers
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Faith

Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: How to get a horse to raise it's foot
Animal Husbandry:Check your horse's foot regularly
Animal Husbandry: A horse's coat does most of the work for it, it rarely needs blankets
Animal Husbandry:How to check if a horse is wet or cold
Animal Husbandry:Warm mash with apples on a cold day keeps a horse happy
Animal Husbandry: The frog: A part of a horse's foot that needs to be trimmed
Animal Husbandry: Lunging your horse = exercising him.
Animal Training: Equine: Getting the horse moving in the yard

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes



Arlo

Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: How to get a horse to raise it's foot
Animal Husbandry:Check your horse's foot regularly
Animal Husbandry: A horse's coat does most of the work for it, it rarely needs blankets
Animal Husbandry:How to check if a horse is wet or cold
Animal Husbandry:Warm mash with apples on a cold day keeps a horse happy
Animal Husbandry: The frog: A part of a horse's foot that needs to be trimmed
Animal Husbandry: Lunging your horse = exercising him.
Animal Training: Equine: Getting the horse moving in the yard


Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Positive for helping?
Collaboration: Yes


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Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (2) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Max » Fri Jan 26, 2018 10:33 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Who Crazy Is
City/Area: Immortal's Tongue, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Pledge Allegiance but Serve Yourself
Intelligence: Picking the Brain of the Religious for Answers
Intelligence: Using Rumors and Legends as Leads
Navigation: Traversing Icy Terrain
Navigation: Finding Your Destination with Directions
Strategy: The Power of Surprise

Location: Immortal's Tongue
Chrien: Created and Abandoned the Mer
Chrien: Hates the Mer
Chrien: Hates Humans
Chrien: Sometimes Saves Humans for...Something Else?
Chrien: You're Her Trojan Horse
Rusalkis: It's a Gift
Rusalkis: More Power in Exchange for Service to Chrien?
Meerabelard: Tribe of Mer Still Loyal to Chrien
Akktava: Scalvoris Mer Tribe


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Posts: 311
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Location: Almund, Scalvoris
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Medals: 4
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nir'wei » Sat Jan 27, 2018 1:12 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Return I.
City/Area: Desnind.
Notes/Warnings: None.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Mount (Sohr Khal): Making yourself as small as possible during descent.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Bracing before landing impact.
Mount (Sohr Khal): Picking the best landing positions from the air.
Fieldcraft: Using spare canvas as a makeshift roof.
Fieldcraft: Trees make good anchoring points for structures.
Fieldcraft: Picking the best location to set up camp to leave plenty of room.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor cuts over arms and legs, on both Nir'wei and Traveller.
Fame: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.


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Posts: 388
Joined: Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:38 am
Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Animal Handler of The Menagerie
Renown: +136
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Player Review
Personal Journal
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Letters
Medals: 10
Story of the Month (1) Painting With Words (1) Mentor (1) Beta Bot (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Right In The Feels (2) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Idalos Awards 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Arlo Creede » Sat Jan 27, 2018 5:18 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Blood Ties
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None. FTB at the end, but very PG13
Requested Rewards:


Arlo

Knowledge:
Cooking: Midnight bacon and egg sandwiches
Storytelling: The story of how Cassion blessed me
Strength: Lift and swing
Strength: Excitement and adrenaline can give a temporary boost


Mark Abilities: Sojourn: Blood Son: Increased Hunger
Mark Abilities: Sojourn: Cassion's Compass: Points in a Direction, but not like a normal compass

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes



Vega

Knowledge:
Carpentry: Carving a hook requires concentration to detail
Carpentry: You need your hands to be still in order to do detailed work
Carpentry: Make sure that hooks are even in their shape by using a small tube with sandpaper around it.
Climbing: Use your upper body strength to your advantage
Climbing: Use legs to build speed in the climb
Climbing: Make full use of knots when climbing a rope
Climbing: Take the weather / environment into account when ice might make things more difficult

Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes


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Posts: 1007
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Race: Human
Profession: Traveler
Renown: +398
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Medals: 13
Story of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) First Love (1) Dreamer (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (2) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (1)

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