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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kasoria » Fri Mar 09, 2018 1:07 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: II. Merchant of Death
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Some Violence

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Ki'Enaq (Merchant of Death)
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Built around Offence and Domination
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Using Armor as a Weapon
Discipline: Control Born from Cadet Training
Endurance: Falling, and Rising Again
Tactics: Attack High, and Low (Whatever Works)


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Hall of Rule and Reprimand, Etzos
NPC Corporal Drix: Ki'Enaq Instructor
NPC Sergeant Tantos: Raised Up from The Gutters
NPC Sergeant Tantos: Kasoria's Patron
NPC Faction: Black Guard of Etzos


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Not sure, but maybe - it's a pretty minor Memory
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A

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Posts: 232
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Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
Renown: +155
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Medals: 3
Painting With Words (1) Murderer (1) History Repeated (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Padraig » Fri Mar 09, 2018 8:32 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Come Join The Murder, Come Fly With Black
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Faith

Knowledge: (6 posts, 11 knowledge)
Needlecraft: Crochet draft excluders
Needlecraft: Using "Careful Laying" with crochet

Bellinos Ability: Durge's Stain: Can be overwhelming
Bellinos Ability: Durge's Stain: Allows you to know how many people died here
Bellinos Ability: Durge's Stain: Needs concentration
Zuuda Ability: Ectoplasmic Blood: Very versatile
Zuuda Ability: Ectoplasmic Blood: Allows you to create objects from blood
Zuuda Ability: Ectoplasmic Blood: Lasts for about 30 bits outside of my grip
Zuuda Ability: Sever the Imposter: Destroys the link between necromancer and construct
Zuuda Ability: Sever the Imposter Severs magic to a thrall / construct
Zuuda Ability: Sever the Imposter: Touch

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably not since we're alone
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Padraig

Knowledge: (6 posts, 11 knowledge)
Alchemy: Working on the fly (capstone)
Alchemy: Using marked blood as a reagent.
Alchemy: Firefly for light
Discipline: Not descending into panic
Investigation: Determining the purpose of a room
Investigation: Identify resources available.
Lockpicking: Physics of a lock
Lockpicking: Basic locks can still be very difficult
Lockpicking: Time consuming
Lockpicking: Requires tools
Unarmed Combat: Shoulder charge

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Since we're alone, probably not.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (1) Hoarder (1)
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (1) True Love (1)
Married (1) Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (1) Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1)
Winner Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Faith » Sat Mar 10, 2018 9:50 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Working From Home
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Faith

Knowledge:
Business Management: Holding meetings in informal settings to put everyone at their ease
Business Management: Consider a one-arc plan
Business Management: The order in which you do things is important
Discipline: Overcoming selfish desires.
Leadership: Tell people not just what, but why
Leadership: Plan for the future together

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: NA
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


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Race: Human
Profession: Chef / Professor
Renown: +1000
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Partner
Personal Journal
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Letters
Medals: 52
Character of the Month (1) Contributor of the Month (1) Story of the Month (1) World Developer (1)
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Shop Keeper (1) Mentor (1) Ambassador (1)
Supporter (1) Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Ascension (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (4)
Hoarder (1) ...ow. (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (2) True Love (1) Married (1) Changed (1)
Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Rynata » Sat Mar 10, 2018 12:01 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: New Beginnings
City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Linguistics: The Scalveen accent
Business Management: Investing in tools of the trade
Persuasion: Subtle flattery
Singing: Traditional Scalveen song (The Tunawa Captain)
Gambling: Placing bets
Detection: Recognizing confidence

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Scalvoris, Almund
Location: Scalvoris, Port Diablo

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP:No
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Posts: 198
Joined: Thu Feb 22, 2018 2:28 pm
Location: Scalvoris
Race: Biqaj
Profession: Ferryman
Renown: +130
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Medals: 2
Peer Reviewer (1) Review Master (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Tristan Venora » Sun Mar 11, 2018 2:14 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Soirée] Guilty Pleasure
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Lots of kissing and touching!
Requested Rewards:[/googlefont]

Valeriw

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Crying ruins make-up
Discipline: Stopping yourself from crying by thinking of happy things
Etiquette: Properly getting to know someone
Intelligence: Asking seemingly innocuous questions to find out what you really want
Leadership: Directing the course of events
Negotiation: Offer something of yourself to get what you want in return
Politics: Considering the repercussions of public actions
Rhetoric: Talking about yourself behind thinly veiled words
Seduction: Holding back
Seduction: The power of kisses
Seduction: Making yourself difficult to resist

Tristan Venora: Stole his grandmother's handkerchief
Tristan Venora: Doesn't care about your outward appearance
Tristan Venora: Kind and considerate
Tristan Venora: Makes naked sculptures and writes plays
Tristan Venora: Made a naked statue of Peake Andaris
Tristan Venora: Has a cat called Mistral
Tristan Venora: Chemist and alchemist
Tristan Venora: Invited you to Oakleigh
Tristan Venora: Has been Ilaren's lover
Tristan Venora: Likes The House of Roses in Andaris
Tristan Venora: Never had a male lover
Personal: Feel comfortable with Tristan Venora
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Up to you!
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Tristan

Knowledge:
Discipline: Sometimes you just can't hold back!
Etiquette: Properly getting to know someone
Etiquette: When she wants wine, bring her some!
Persuasion: Convincing somebody that everything will be alright
Politics: A duke is more powerful than a baroness!
Politics: Considering the repercussions of public actions
Seduction: Tell her that she's beautiful
Seduction: Talk about things that she likes
Seduction: Return the favour
Seduction: Humor can be helpful
Seduction: Sometimes you are seducing each other!

Valeria Burhan: Would never hurt anybody
Valeria Burhan: Has a cat
Valeria Burhan: Visited the House of Roses as well
Valeria Burhan: Likes men and women
Valeria Burhan: Not jealous
Valeria Burhan: Addictive

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Up to you!
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Location: Andaris
Race: Human
Profession: Duke of Oakleigh
Renown: +374
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Medals: 25
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Alpha Testing (1)
Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1)
Pioneer (2) Hoarder (1) Right In The Feels (1) Changed (1)
Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Puppet Master (1) Pen Pal (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (2)
Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kasoria » Sun Mar 11, 2018 6:34 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: III. Picked The Wrong House, Lads
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Delightfully Vicious Violence... and here is Part Three! As you can tell from the ending, there's more to come, but this is a good start. A collab or a new three-parter will be following at some point. Until then, enjoy, and thanks in advance!

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Everything is a Weapon
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Swift Flurries of Punches
Endurance: The Will to Survive
Tactics: Buying Time with Thrown Debris
Tactics: Using a Human Shields (or Pincushion)
Discipline: Don't Get Distracted by Gloating


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A - Memory, so just a couple of scars
Renown: Oh, yes. Up to you, of course, but this is the whole reason why no-one breaks into Kasoria's house anymore
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: No
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Posts: 232
Joined: Sat Apr 23, 2016 11:34 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
Renown: +155
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Medals: 3
Painting With Words (1) Murderer (1) History Repeated (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Arlo Creede » Sun Mar 11, 2018 11:29 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: At What Cost, Freedom?
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge: (3 posts, 8 knowledge)
Dancing: Dancing with movements like water
Dancing: Changing tempo mid-dance
Dancing: Punctuate the notes
Dancing: Punctuate between the notes
Dancing: An uninhibited dance is more fluid
Meditation: Allowing silence into your mind
Meditation: Familiar surroundings help meditation
Meditation: Much easier when comfortable

Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably not since we're alone
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Arlo

Knowledge: (3 posts, 8 knowledge)
Cooking: Turkey, Roast and Greens
Cooking: Poached pears with caramel
Fieldcraft: Preparing a turkey after killing
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Combine strum and pluck for a diverse melody
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Playing music for dancing
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Changing tempo mid-melody
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Playing as a meditative tool
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Not using a pick produces a softer, more organic sound.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Since we're alone, probably not.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Posts: 1007
Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2017 5:15 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Traveler
Renown: +398
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Medals: 13
Story of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Hallowed (1) First Love (1) Dreamer (1)
Party Animal (1) Lol Worthy (2) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Ivanthe » Mon Mar 12, 2018 10:24 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Honeychild
City/Area: en route from Foster's Landing to Etzos
Notes/Warnings: bit of assholery, not much else
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Medicine: proper poultice making
  • Medicine: burdock as disinfectant
  • Medicine: honey as disinfectant
  • Fieldcraft: blocking the wind however possible
  • Fieldcraft: marking time by star movement
  • Deception: really, I'm fine
Loot: handful of willow bark, handful of chamomile, handful of yarrow root
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: probably not.
Collaboration: no.
Magic EXP: no.

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Posts: 84
Joined: Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:40 am
Location: Etzos
Race: Human
Renown: +35
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Medals: 2
Murderer (1) Survivor (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Murphy Clyde » Tue Mar 13, 2018 12:40 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Fated Meeting
City/Area: Venora
Notes/Warnings: Sickeningly cute?
Requested Rewards - Murphy:
Knowledge:
-Animal Husbandry: Gently Combing Out a Mane
-Animal Husbandry: Assessing a Horses Legs for Injury
-Animal Husbandry: Providing Food and Water after Travel
-Business: Informing business partners on stock
-Business: Singing the Graces of your Stock
-Leadership: Leading a tour of Oakridge Stabbles
-Mount: Riding At A Canter
-Mount: Slowing A Horse With Reins and Legs
-Mount: Allowing A Horse Some Freedom To Lead
-Mount: Mounting Without Assistance
-Mount: Controlling Turns

-Jonathan: Works as his Father's Partner
-Jonathan: Treats His Horses with Care and Respect
-Jonathan: Doesn't Ride As Much As He'd Like
-Oakridge: The Clyde's Stables in Venora
-Destriers: The Ideal Warhorse

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Requested Rewards - Jon:
Knowledge:
Construction: Laying floorboards
Construction: Driving nails
Construction: Reinforcing boards
Animal Husbandry: Letting an animal sniff your hand
Animal Husbandry: Speaking softly to an animal
Animal Husbandry (Horse): Wiping down sweat marks
Mount (Horse): Walking
Mount (Horse): Straightening the saddle
Investigation: General everyday questions
Investigation: Personal questions

Murphy Clyde: Stablehand
Murphy Clyde: Loves horses
Murphy Clyde: Born in Oakleigh
Geo Clyde: Murphy’s uncle
Geo Clyde: Stablemaster
Goldbloods: Bred in Oakleigh
Oakleigh Destriers: Bred in Venora
Oakleigh Destriers: Often used by knights
Location: (Venora) Clyde Stables

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Posts: 64
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Race: Human
Profession: Stable Master
Renown: +30
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Rynata » Tue Mar 13, 2018 12:06 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: There and Back Again
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Navigation: Navigating icy waters
Seafaring: Setting a cautious pace
Seafaring: Hauling in the sails
Strength: Putting weight behind an exerted force
Etiquette: Showing concern for someone's comfort
Detection: Recognizing unease

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Scalvoris, Faldrass
Location: Faldrass, Serenity Garden

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Slight and for getting a new job
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Rynata
Reverse Pirate
 
Posts: 198
Joined: Thu Feb 22, 2018 2:28 pm
Location: Scalvoris
Race: Biqaj
Profession: Ferryman
Renown: +130
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Plot Notes
Medals: 2
Peer Reviewer (1) Review Master (1)

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