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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Faith » Sun Jan 21, 2018 7:14 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Trees are people, too
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Qit'ria

Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 knowledge)
  1. Stealth: Find cover before you need it
  2. Stealth: Groups of people provide cover
  3. Unarmed Combat: Punch first
  4. Endurance: Punching hurts your hand
  5. Intimidation: Snarl when threatened
  6. Tactics: Don't fight when it benefits you
  7. Discipline: Calming down when presented with an alternate solution
  8. Teaching: Using real examples when translating languages
  9. Cooking: Rub the raw meat with spices
  10. Cooking: Cook meat on a skewer
  11. Logistics: Ensure proper preparation for cold season

Other

  1. Katara is taking over Grenald's business soon
  2. Faith; Healer for the Order of the Adunih
  3. Faith; is on the Council
  4. Faith; is an Officer for Welfare
  5. Faith; will stop a bullying situation
  6. Scalvoris; ties ribbons around trees in Vhalar
  7. Faith; pays respect to Moseke
  8. Faith; is a cook at a restaurant
  9. Faith; knows the traditional Sev'ryn greeting
  10. Faith; grows vegetables
  11. Faith; doesn't hunt
  12. Faith; to be married to Paddyrags
  13. Faith; to be married in Desnind
  14. Faith; is pregnant
  15. Faith; helped find a better skins buyer

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes



Faith

Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 knowledge max)
Leadership: Taking charge of a potentially volatile situation
Leadership: Use rank and renown to diffuse a situation
Leadership: Threaten with a smile
Leadership: Stop people being disappointed by offering something else.
Negotiation: Barter and trade
Psychology: Don't offer charity, offer barter.
Teaching: How to cook over a campfire

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Helping Qit'ria (avoiding a fight, offering fair trade, showing her a new skin-seller helping with the stew) 4 x good deeds = +8?
Collaboration: Yes


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Charlie Warrick » Sun Jan 21, 2018 9:41 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Black and White
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Cheesy af. Only Darcy, Oliver, and Charlie are requesting rewards here.
Requested Rewards:

Oliver
Politics: Giving speeches
Politics: Enforcing positive change
Politics: Appealing to nobles' egos
Etiquette: Thanking people for their charity
Etiquette: Surprising someone with an honour
Dancing: Keeping in time
Dancing: Leading a woman
Dancing: Spinning a woman into you

Darcyanna
Politics: Holding your own in a matter of barony business transactions
Politics: Calming your nerves to perform your best
Musical Instrument (Piano): Playing a duet on the same piano
Musical Instrument (Piano): Following a count in
Musical Instrument (Piano): Taking pointers from a Master
Musical Instrument (Piano): Taking the lead during a duet

Non-Skill:
Oliver: Had Malero secretly come to the gala
Oliver: Let you join Malero in a duet
Oliver: Follows Rynlism
Oliver: Is pretty taken with Charlie
Oliver: Wants you to play at his future wedding...oneday
Charlie: Is exactly the right person for Oliver
Charlie: Complimented your playing

NPC: Master Malero
Master Malero: offered you tuition

Charlie
Politics: Maintaining a superficial veneer
Politics: Beer is a ‘poor man’s drink’
Etiquette: Don’t flirt so much in public
Etiquette: Offering your congratulations to a friend
Dancing: Following a man
Dancing: Following someone’s guidance
Dancing: Spinning

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Positive for Darcy for playing a gala, positive for Charlie and Oliver for dancing at a gala
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Navyri » Mon Jan 22, 2018 1:38 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Show Stopper
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Merces got banned, so I had to finish this up.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: 15xp
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Faith » Mon Jan 22, 2018 3:25 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: When I'm lost, I feel so very found
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Padraig

Knowledge:
None required


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Don't think so?
Collaboration: Yes



Faith

Knowledge:
None requested.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Positive for gift giving?
Collaboration: Yes


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Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Shop Keeper (1) Mentor (1) Ambassador (1)
Supporter (1) Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Ascension (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (4)
Hoarder (1) ...ow. (1) First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (2) True Love (1) Married (1) Changed (1)
Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Dreamer (1) Party Animal (1) Pen Pal (1) Mailman (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Arlo Creede » Mon Jan 22, 2018 4:08 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: One, two, three..... eat!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Arlo

Knowledge:
Cooking: Hot chocolate
Cooking: Oats with dates and honey
Fieldcraft: Checking the horses in camp, too
Hunting: Much more difficult in the depths of winter
Logistics: Planning gifts in advance
Navigation: Different kinds of maps.
Navigation: Can be by stars
Psychology: Reading difficulties can be for a variety of reasons
Storytelling: Everything is a story
Tactics: Vega cheats at snowball fights. Be prepared


Loot: Ledger is updated
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Gift: Woodworkers kit (+2), Bumblebee Hat (+2), Bumblebee undergarments (+2), Chocolate Selection (+2) = +8
Collaboration: Yes



Vega

Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Keep horses warm in the coldest seasons
Carpentry: Cover where you're working to prevent dust
Climbing: Tree climbing in the snow
Climbing: Grabbing on with your knees
Storytelling: Tale from childhood
Storytelling: Giving a gift and a story
Strength: Climbing a tree builds strength in your legs.
Strength: Using your upper body weight to move
Tactics: Dirty tactics are fine.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: 2 x Books (+4), 1 x hat (+2), 1 x carving (+2) 1 x shell (+2) = +10
Collaboration: Yes


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Virikai Talius » Mon Jan 22, 2018 5:57 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Footloose
City/Area: Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Continuation of Virikai and Maebella attending a formal function.
Requested Rewards:

Maebella (Skill: 11)
Etiquette: Bowing and Curtseying
Etiquette: Don’t Offend Your Date
Etiquette: Eat Small Bites
Etiquette: Make a Good First Impression
Politics: Focus on Education, not Marriage
Politics: Formal Functions are Good to Circulate
Rhetoric: Calling Someone Out
Rhetoric: False Modesty
Rhetoric: Formal Introductions
Rhetoric: Polite Conversation
Seduction: Allowing Another to Lead
Academia: Motivations for Study
(NPC) Lord Taelis Voren: Lord Voren
(NPC) Lord Orthen Voren: Heir Voren
(NPC) Lord Verity Talius: Lord Talius
(NPC) Lord Talius: At Odds with his Son
Viden: Alcohol Prohibition Laws
Viden Aristocracy: Talius Family
Viden Aristocracy: Voren Family
Virikai Talius: Left Tertiary Studies for a While
Voren Family: Keep Tabs on Me


Virikai (Skill: 11)
Etiquette: Bowing and Curtseying
Etiquette: Fine Food Engenders Fine Company
Etiquette: Managing a Partner’s Discomfort
Etiquette: Defending Your Partner’s Honour
Politics: Focus on Education, not Marriage
Politics: Formal Functions are Good to Circulate
Rhetoric: Formal Introductions
Rhetoric: Polite Conversation
Seduction: Hand Placement
Seduction: Reading Signals
Seduction: Protective Gestures
Academia: Motivations for Study
Maebella: Anti-Social
Maebella: Descendant of the Voren Family
Meabella: Disowned by the Voren Family
(NPC) Lord Taelis Voren: Lord Voren
(NPC) Lord Orthen Voren: Heir Voren
(NPC) Lord Verity Talius: Lord Talius
(NPC) Lord Talius: Disapproves of Me
Viden: Alcohol Prohibition Laws
Viden Aristocracy: Talius Family
Viden Aristocracy: Voren Family


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Something Positive for general interactions at the Function?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Virikai Talius » Mon Jan 22, 2018 6:31 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Different Kind of Dance
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Maebella
(NPC): Orthen Voren: Hates Me?
Psychology: A Star Can’t Fit into a Square
Virikai Talius: Dominant
Virikai Talius: Intimidating
Virikai Talius: Likes to be in Control
Virikai Talius: Potentially Violent


Virikai
Maebella: A Defiant Paradox
Maebella: Beautiful when Blushing
Maebella: Sensitive to Seductive Touches
Maebella: Responsive to Me
(NPC): Orthen Voren: Hates Maebella?
Psychology: A Star Can’t Fit into a Square


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Qit'ria » Tue Jan 23, 2018 12:00 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: When the Cat's Away, the Mice Will Play
City/Area: Sweetvine Woods, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mild Violence against an Aye-Aye mouse
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Hunting: Aye-Aye Mouse Kill
Thrown (Chakram): Hold it from inside the ring
Butchering: Carving up an Aye-Aye Mouse
Field Craft: Setting up a smoking fire
Carpentry: Setting up a smoking spit
Cooking: Cold Smoked Aye-Aye Mouse jerky

Loot: 3lb cold smoked aye-aye mouse jerky
Aye-aye mouse bones
Aye-aye mouse pelt
Aye-aye mouse offal
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Valeria Burhan » Tue Jan 23, 2018 2:25 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Soirée] I'm Spinning Around...
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:


Valeria Burhan


Knowledge:
  • Skill Knowledge
    • Cosmetology: Don't lace a corset too tightly
    • Endurance: Breathing through pain
    • Politics: Determining another's rank in Ryn society
    • Detection: Spotting possessiveness in others
    • Politics: Damage control
    • Rhetoric: The art of small talk
    • Deception: Faking disinterest
    • Acting: Exaggerating weakness
    • Detection: Spotting signs of true affection
    • Etiquette: Giving appropriate congratulations
  • Non-Skill Knowledge
    • Nathaniel Endor: You fainted on him
    • Nathaniel Endor: Handsome
    • Velaine Krome: A strong young woman
    • Velaine Krome: Lightweight with alcohol
    • Velaine Krome: Was in Ne'haer
    • Velaine Krome: Betrothed to Nathaniel Endor
    • Nathaniel Endor: A man of his word (apparently)
    • Velaine Krome and Nathaniel Endor: A pretty pair
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: No (injuries will be revealed in a later thread)
Fame: Positive would be lovely if possible but it's more likely that she'll be causing problems so it's up to the reviewer!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


Nathaniel Endor

Knowledge:
  • Skill Knowledge
    • Strength: Catching a Woman on the Fly
    • Etiquette: Asking for a Seat for the Lady
    • Etiquette: The Varying Fashion Choices of Each House
    • Etiquette: Never Imply a Woman is Inebriated
    • Etiquette: Excusing Oneself From a Conversation
    • Politics: Actions Often End in Misinterpreted Rumors
    • Politics: A Man Always Loses When Around Women
    • Politics: Marriage Information Travels Quickly
    • Politics: Appropriate Word Choice is Important
    • Politics: Honor Swearing Can Solves Problems
  • Non-Skill Knowledge
    • House Burhan: Valeria Burhan
    • Valeria Burhan: Always Dressed to Impress
    • Valeria Burhan: May Be Killing Herself to Look Good
    • Valeria Burhan: Knows Velaine Krome
    • Valeria Burhan: Not the Best Introduction
    • Valeria Burhan: Alcoholic?
    • Velaine Krome: Capable of Finding Me
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Something positive for being Val's saviour, but reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


Velaine Krome


Knowledge:
  • Skill Knowledge
    • Politics: Nobles Love Gossips
    • Politics: Making Sure The Good Impressions Last
    • Politics: Small Talks are Important
    • Politics: Knowing When to Stay Out of Things
    • Deception: Pretending to be Innocent
    • Deception: Playing Ignorance to Keep Up Appearance
    • Deception: Making Up Excuses
    • Detection: Noticing When Someone Lost Interest
    • Detection: Biqaj Eyes Shift Colors to Show Emotions
  • Non-Skill Knowledge
    • Valeria Burhan: An Old Acquaintance
    • Valeria Burhan: Still Unattached
    • Valeria Burhan: Upset When Discussing About Partners
    • Valerian Burhan: Probably Won't Get Along With Nathaniel
    • Nathaniel Endor: Keeps You on Your Toes
    • Nathaniel Endor: Uninterested in Noble Small Talks
    • Nathaniel Endor: Probably Won't Get Along With Valeria
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Yanahalqah » Tue Jan 23, 2018 4:58 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Noble blood, noble heart?
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Celeste continues to be the most savage noble in Rynmere
Requested Rewards:

CELESTE:
Cosmetology: Tiny finishing touches to make up make one look polished
Cosmetology: Dressing for pregnancy
Intelligence: Know as much as possible before an official visit
Intelligence: Learn little details to ensure that you are well received
Intelligence: Consider tiny details, even down to gender of your guard
Intelligence: When visiting children, gauge how your guard will react around them at home
Intelligence: Know names before you arrive
Persuasion: There's nothing as persuasive as proving them wrong

YANA:
Etiquette: how to address a Baroness
Etiquette: An appointment is an appointment
Deception: Sometimes deception backfires
Discipline: being polite to nobles
Discipline: executing assignments you don’t want to
Discipline: giving dull assignments your all
Politics: Sucking up to nobles isn’t a good idea?
Politics: Making a good impression on political figures to further your career
Politics: studying superior politicians in order to grow
Celeste Andaris: Baroness of Astedia
Celeste Andaris: does charities
Celeste Andaris: Political Predator
Celeste Andaris: Has an adopted daughter

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame:
  • Celeste: Positive for giving gifts to children (x10) and donation of money (x200gn)
  • Yana: positive for doing her job well enough to leave a good impression
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Magic is banned in Rynmere, yo. No filthy mages here.

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