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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nauta F'mos Geey » Thu Feb 15, 2018 12:55 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Weapon of choice
City/Area: Sirothelle
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Blades (Rapier): Geey favored weapon trained from young
  • Shield (Buckler): Having one is better than leaving a hand idle
  • Blades (Rapier): The appropriate weapon for an urban environment
  • Blades (Rapier): A better reach compared to a dagger
  • Blades (Rapier): Lunge in to strike at a target
  • Blades (Rapier): The recovery after an attack is important
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: -

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Sephira » Thu Feb 15, 2018 3:43 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Waterlogged
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Sephira trains with the Water Troops
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Swimming: Treading Water
Swimming: Keeping you bearings
Swimming: Floating on your back
Unarmed Combat (Grappling): Getting out of a hold
Strength: Swimming for an extended period of time
Discipline: Calming down when panicked and disoriented

Non-Skill Knowledge
Faction: Water Troops: Protectors of Scalvoris's waters
Location: Gleamwater Sanctuary: Water Troop Command Post

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Muscle soreness for a trial
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Virikai Talius » Fri Feb 16, 2018 11:52 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Scholarly Interest
City/Area: FRA, Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Sekrit stuff o.o
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: No Empathy for Research Subjects
Research: The Applications of Theory
Research: The Foundation to Progress
Research: Step 1: Identifying Research Questions
Research: Step 2: Critical Appraisals of the Literature
Research: Step 3: Experimental Research and Empirical Evidence

Non-Skill Knowledge
FRA: Longitudinal Research Project
FRA: Research into Developmental Milestones of Mortal Races
Race: Aukari
Aukari: Can be Overcome by Emotions
Aukari: Struggle with Puzzle Tasks

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Virikai Talius » Fri Feb 16, 2018 1:32 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Epiphany
City/Area: FRA, Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Hypothesis: The Impact of Language on Cognition
Linguistics: Hypothesis: Language Shapes Thinking and Behaviour
Research: Identifying Problems
Research: Insubstantial, Inconclusive and Negative Results
Research: Step 4: Analyse the Results
Research: Step 5: Consolidate the Information


Non-Skill Knowledge
Aukari: Spoken Language: Vauni
Aukari: Written Language: Sau'ei

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Virikai Talius » Fri Feb 16, 2018 2:57 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Absence Makes the Heart Grow Fonder
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Maebella (11):
Discipline: Knowing When to Take a Break
Etiquette: Appropriate Greetings
Research: Practical Experiences
Rhetoric: Playful Joking
Rhetoric: Quips and Retorts
Rhetoric: Use of Sarcasm
Seduction: Chaste Kisses
Seduction: Fluttering Eyelashes
Seduction: Ply with Fruit and Alcohol
Seduction: Sweet Smiles
Seduction: Teasing Remarks

Location: Aranaz Family Estate
Location: The Fruit Gardens
Menchoros: Cerebral, not just Physical
Menchoros: Martial Art
Viden Aristocracy: Aranaz Family
Virikai: Kissed Me!
Virikai: Likes Me!



Virikai (11):
Intimidation: Silent Communication
Intimidation: Use of Rank and Status
Leadership: Managing Slaves
Research: Practical Experiences
Rhetoric: Quips and Retorts
Rhetoric: Using Metaphors
Seduction: Chaste Kisses
Seduction: Ensure Her Safety
Seduction: Eliciting Blushes
Seduction: Ply with Fruit and Alcohol
Seduction: Use of Pet Names

Location: Aranaz Family Estate
Location: The Fruit Gardens
Maebella: Marches to the Beat of her Own Drum
Xypha: Sending Ideas and Images
Xypha: Silent Communication
Viden Aristocracy: Aranaz Family

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: Nope

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Virikai Talius » Fri Feb 16, 2018 3:40 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Blessings in Disguise
City/Area: FRA, Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Didn't realise I could claim points for my Blessing request lol
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Ignoring the Stench of Bodily Fluid
Discipline: Learning Humility
Discipline: Managing Unsightly Wounds
Discipline: Working Even if You're Above It
Discipline: Working Without Complaint
Negotiation: Reasoning With a Patient

FRA: Secret Research Facility
Yvithia's Blessing: Xypha



Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Charlie Warrick » Fri Feb 16, 2018 11:05 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Shoot Straight
City/Area: Warrick
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Meditative breathing helps aim
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Minute adjustments in the body can cause huge aim differences
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): The parts of an arrow
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): The weight of an arrow should be balanced
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Making the arrowhead align with its destination
Strength: Shoulder muscles are used to keep a drawn bow steady

Ethan: Your archery tutor
Ethan: Patient

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (2) First Kiss (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nightshade Eld » Fri Feb 16, 2018 11:50 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sinking
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Just a 'cute' little memory thread ;3
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Gardening: Supporting top heavy flowers
Meditation: Mantras
Meditation: ‘The goal is to be at peace with yourself’
Meditation: Patience is key
Swimming: Drowning is bad
Swimming: Flailing madly isn’t swimming

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nightshade Eld » Sat Feb 17, 2018 12:05 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Ink Lines
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nothing in particular.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Buisness Managment: Dealing with Repuation
Drawing: Large sweeping motion
Drawing: The effects of pressure
Drawing: Weight of a quill
Drawing: It’s time to learn color
Drawing: Color theory

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A

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First Kiss (1) History Repeated (1) Enemy of My Enemy (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
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Cylus 717 All Star (1) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (2)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Velaine Krome » Sat Feb 17, 2018 1:57 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Memento
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nurp.
Requested Rewards:


Velaine Krome


Skill Knowledge:
Etiquette: Sleeping Together Without Actually Sleeping Together
Discipline: Keep Your Face Neutral and Calm
Discipline: Wait For the Right Time
Meditation: To Calm Emotions
Meditation: Focus On Your Breathing
Meditation: Sink Into the Darkness
Empathy: More Reliable Method of Controlling Your Emootions
Empathy: Knotting Away Anxieties
Empathy: Pushing Emotions Deep
Politics: Considering All the Options
Politics: Endor or Krome?
Politics: Controlling Krome by Being Duchess Endor
Politics: Trust is Difficult

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Nathaniel Endor: Been With More Women Than He Could Count
Nathaniel Endor: More Sensitive Than You Expected
Nathaniel Endor: Thinks Ruling Endor Is Best
Nathaniel Endor: Far Too Kind
Marshal Jeev: Nathaniel’s Right Hand Man
Marshal Jeev: Manservant of House Endor
Nadia Harwyn: Gift from Caius Gawyne
Nadia Harwyn: Master Mine Architect

Loot: Yes, an Echo Scroll From Nate
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Nah
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: Yep


Nathaniel Endor


Skill Knowledge:
Seduction: Honesty in Sleep is Sexy
Seduction: The Beauty of a Surprise Gift
Seduction: A Woman Looks Good in the Morning
Endurance: The Benefit of a Good Night's Sleep
Resistance: Able to Keep the Clothes On
Stealth: Nathaniel's Black Book of Women
Business Management: Marshall Jeev, Head of Personnel
Business Management: Nadia Harwyn, Mine Architect and Gift from Caius
Business Management: The Flow of Nel
Politics: Presenting the Facts
Politics: House Krome vs. House Endor, Pros and Cons
Politics: The Emasculation of a Name
Politics: The Weight of a Title

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Velaine Krome: Interested in Nathaniel's Past
Velaine Krome: Appreciates the Gift
Velaine Krome: The Other Half of the Echo Scroll
Velaine Krome: Interested in Renewing House Krome

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: Nah
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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