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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nightshade Eld » Sat Feb 10, 2018 8:22 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dispute
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: First thread posted in months! Yaaaay... I'm... So sorry about the quality.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Cartography: It's harder to scout during Cylus
Cartography: Fewer people buy maps in Cylus
Cartography: Scouts get bored easily
Cartography: Different interpretations of ancient/fake maps
Cartography: Telling if a map is fake or not
Leadership: Stopping a Fight

Loot: Nope.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: I'm too lazy
Collaboration: Nah
Magic EXP: Never!


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Max » Sun Feb 11, 2018 2:43 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Rusalkis Quest] Saboteur
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Language and violence. Should probably be graded by a storyteller for Rusalkis rewards.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: Striking from the Flank
Deception: Denying True Rumors
Stealth: Sneaking About a Ship Unnoticed
Strategy: Making a Plan Quickly
Blades: Severing an Appendage
Endurance: Continuing to Work After Combat
Intelligentsia: A Scholar Faction
Akktava: Gathers Intelligence from Scalvoris Ships
Akktava: Working for Someone in Scalvoris
Turbulent Waters: More Deadly in Cold Water

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative (killing a Mer, kidnapping, backstabbing her crew, sinking the ship and killing everyone on board, etc.)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No.

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nightshade Eld » Sun Feb 11, 2018 3:25 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Cutting Through Deceptions
City/Area: Etzos (Part of me wonders if I'll ever write something different on this account...
Notes/Warnings: There is (almost) always violence in a Night thread. Is it graphic? Not nessisarily. Does it refence some pretty heavy stuff? Most certainly!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades: The demands of blade sharpening
Blades: A sword can only be sharpened so many times...
Blades: Redbrand might need to be retired
Blades: Talon blades are even more effective in the dark
Blades: Cutting off a hand
Detection: Figuring out who is lying

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: A little
Fame:
I'm gonna jump off the list because I feel like this nonsense requires some good fame! My numbers are rough estimations as to what I believe they would be, but of course, fame is always at the discretion of the reviewer.

+2 Helping Azer and Imme
+1 Stopping an abusive father
Anything else glaring that you feel merciful enough to give me.

Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nada
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First Kiss (1) History Repeated (1) Enemy of My Enemy (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
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Cylus 717 All Star (1) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (2)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Faith » Sun Feb 11, 2018 11:37 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Family
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Overly Emotional Pregnant Woman Alert
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Kura
Politics: Darbyton Temperament
Politics: The realities of slavery
Politics: The steps to political change
Medicine: Calming a worried friend
Medicine: Distracting from panic attacks
Sociology: Thinking about panic attacks makes them more likely
Tactics: Having your familiar secretly escort a friend home

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Politics: Means to make abolition smoother and safer
Politics: Darbyton Temperment
Politics: Reaching out to other territories
Politics: Global picture
Medicine: Distracting from panic attacks
Sociology: Thinking about panic attacks makes them more likely
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yup
Magic EXP: Nope

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Medals: 52
Character of the Month (1) Contributor of the Month (1) Story of the Month (1) World Developer (1)
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Shop Keeper (1) Mentor (1) Ambassador (1)
Supporter (1) Beta Bot (1) Review Master (1) One Arc Later... (1)
Living Legend (1) Ascension (1) Hallowed (1) Pioneer (4)
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Sun Feb 11, 2018 4:07 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sowing the seeds of victory viewtopic.php?f=263&t=10467
City/Area: Middlecleft, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Gangui brings up pedophilia and child rape and all that, but in verbal form. So, yeah, warning.
Requested Rewards:

Kovic

Negotiation: Sticking to facts, not fiction
Discipline: No means no
Acting: Restraining false emotions
Politics: The bigger vs smaller picture
Negotiation: Minding the conditions of a deal
Persuasion: Inspiring rage in others

Gangui: Leader of the Sons of Justice
Gangui: Straight-forward
Gangui: Offered a “bribe”
Gangui: Paranoid
Gangui: Ignorant about Middlecleft’s workings

Gangui:

Negotiation: Heavy Handing Donation
Rhetoric: Imp Pressions
Persuasion: An appeal to honor
Persuasion: Bringing hard evidence
Leadership: Commanders energy
Politics: Educators don’t play
Rhetoric: Classical Pahrnism
Negotiation: Withdrawing the offer
Business Management: Assigning investigators

Kovic: Known only as Paplo to Gangui
Paplo: Headmaster of Orphanage
Paplo: Hates pedophiles
Paplo: Honorable, but has no backbone
Paplo: Feminine man
Location: Middlecleft’s Orphanage of Friendship and Tolerance
Location: Middlecleft
Middlecleft: Small town with small politics



Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Negative for Kovic, positive for Gangui. I'll do oral favors to you if you do so, dear reviewer

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: *barfs*

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Pash Raj'oriq » Sun Feb 11, 2018 7:17 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Not a Muse'd
City/Area: Bayward, near Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: Dead thread from six months ago. I have 3 posts so I thought I'd just go ahead and turn it in.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (8):
Detection: Picking out the thief in the crowd
Meditation: A change of scenery can be refreshing
Meditation: Losing yourself in a crowd
Stealth: It's not stealing if you borrow by accident
Socialization: Recognizing signs of trouble in a crowd
Strength: Resisting being pinned
Strength: Freeing oneself from a tight grip
Unarmed Combat: Evasive maneuvers

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Bayward
Bayward: Has an active night life

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Oliver Venora » Mon Feb 12, 2018 12:21 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Belle of the Ball
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Nah.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (10):
Discipline: Watching one's words around a stranger
Etiquette: Never assume someone is with a date
Etiquette: Sharing banter with a noble lady
Etiquette: Directing conversation towards one's partner
Etiquette: Politely excusing oneself
Etiquette: Introducing staff to the guests
Politics: Making friendships for later use
Politics: Using knowledge of a place as a conversation piece
Rhetoric: Witty banter
Rhetoric: Discussing ducal history


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Valeria Burhan: From Senlin, in Burhan
Valeria Burhan: Flirtatious
Valeria Burhan: Is familiar with Caius


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Profession: Noble
Renown: +95
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Valeria Burhan » Mon Feb 12, 2018 12:38 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Belle of the Ball
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora
Notes/Warnings: Nada.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Skill
    • Detection: Spotting others who know themselves to be attractive
    • Seduction: Giving less than subtle hints
    • Rhetoric: Indirect compliments
    • Politics: Complimenting another's home region
    • Detection: Noting downturns in mood
    • Rhetoric: Clever conversation
    • Seduction: Utilising an almost physical gaze
    • Deception: Thoughtless lies
    • Etiquette: Polite refusal
    • Rhetoric: Finding common topics to discuss
  • Non-Skill
    • Oliver Venora: Darcy's brother
    • Oliver Venora: Host of the Zi'da 717 Charity Gala
    • Charlotte Warrick: Sergeant of the Skyriders
    • Charlotte Warrick: Has a romantic attachment to Oliver Venora
    • Oliver Venora: Has Biqaj eyes
    • Bria (NPC): Servant at Notrerevé
    • Bria (NPC): Has a crush on Caius Gawyne
    • History: Grain shortage in Rynmere 40 arcs ago
Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Maebella » Mon Feb 12, 2018 3:33 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Teamwork
City/Area: Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Might be a lil gross to some. Dead things are described and cut up. It's only a little bit gross though, not too bad. If you can't stomach the skill knowledges, you probably can't manage the thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Skill
    • Endurance: Trying not to throw up in disgusting conditions
    • Research: Correct protective clothing to wear when working in a lab
    • Medicine: Handling corpses with care
    • Strength: Sometimes lifting requires more than one person
    • Medicine: Sweetleaf jelly helps with the stench when cutting up dead bodies
    • Medicine: Major organs in the body
  • Non-skill
    • Olen (NPC): Biology Researcher
    • Assistant Researcher: Sometimes an unpleasant job
Loot: Nope!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope!
Fame: Positive for helping in the furtherance of science??? Nah, I'm kind of chancing my arm. Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Maebella » Mon Feb 12, 2018 3:53 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: All Work, No Play
City/Area: Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Skill
    • Logistics: Organising your workspace
    • Rhetoric: Don't give the other person an opening to counter
    • Unarmed Combat: Putting full strength behind a strike
    • Intimidation: Calm threats
    • Research: Skimming a source in search of key words
    • Research: Speed reading for a sense of a source's overall content
  • Non-skill
    • Alicia Pierce (NPC): Lecturer and Researched in the Institute of Languages
    • Jevan Cordale (NPC): You hit him; it felt necessary
    • Naerrik: All-female race
    • Grovokian: Language of the Naerrik
    • Sarraski: Settlement near Augiery
    • Augiery: Men aren't allowed there
    • Augiery: Southern Idalosian city of the Naerrik
    • Naerrik: Trade in male slaves
    • Grovokian: 'Kentzea' means 'removal'
    • Desnind: Southern Idalosian city of the Sev'ryn
    • Xanthea: Language of the Sev'ryn
    • Magani: Tunawa city somewhere near Desnind
    • Tunawa: Secretive about Magani
Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

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Medals: 4
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