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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Neronin » Thu Feb 08, 2018 11:29 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Old Friends
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mild necromancy violence, murder >.>
Requested Rewards:

Kovic
Knowledge:
Psychology: Detachment from mortality
Strength: Fighting the mud
Running: Extremely difficult in mud
Detection: Recognizing physical changes
Discipline: Killing the killing intent
Deception: Lie after lie
Deception: Mixing truth and fiction
Psychology: Assessing character flaws

Magic: Necromancy (Sap)
Neronin: Prideful and smug
Neronin: Lacks respect
Kovic: Disenchanted from mortal’s wonders
Kovic: Slowly becoming ruthless

Loot: -5gn
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: Reviewer choice
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Neronin
Knowledges:
Rupturing: Fleeing the scene of a crime
Disguise: Pretending to be an old man
Detection: Recognizing familiar faces in the dark
Stealth: Using racks of clothes to hide
Business Management: Paying for things you need
Stealth: Using Sap to cover retreat
Intelligence: Trying to discern motive
Intelligence: Knowing when to keep your secrets

Kovic: Rude and aggressive
Kovic: Possibly an enemy

Loot: -8sn
Injuries/Overstepping: minor overstepping
Fame: Reviewer choice
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nah


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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Doran » Fri Feb 09, 2018 2:40 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fox Hunt
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: no
Requested Rewards:

Nauta


Knowledge:
Leadership: Evaluate a partner through action
Leadership: Come prepared to inspire competence
Tactics: A plan of attack based on collected information
Deception: Suggesting a course of action based on the appropriate tool
Blades (Longsword): Strike and jump back
Poisons: Size of the target may affect effectiveness of dosages
Ranged (Longbow): Aim high
Blades (Longsword): Strike low
Tactics: Spread out an opponent's defences for easy hits

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A


Doran


Knowledge:
Research: Researching the animal you are going to fight
Stealth: Moving quietly
Poisons: Frostfire Poison
Poison: Applying poison to weapons
Tactics: A plan of attack based on collected information
Tactics: Taking advantage of a temporary weakness
Blades (Longsword): Aiming for the vulnerable body parts
Blades (Longsword): Making several attacks in quick succession to tire your target out
Endurance: A long fight

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Caius Gawyne » Fri Feb 09, 2018 1:14 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Pre-Gaming with Gifts
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nah.
Requested Rewards:

Caius Gawyne


Skill Knowledge (8+1):
Business Management: Negotiating with personal details
Business Management: Receiving outside investments
Business Management: Recognizing a good offer
Etiquette: Accepting a generous gift
Etiquette: Making difficult promises
Politics: Betrothal gossip
Politics: Giving the gift of an employee
Politics: Goodwill between Houses
Politics: Knowing you have a friend and a professional ally

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Noble House: Endor
House Endor: Close ally to Gawyne
Nathaniel Endor: Nathaniel Humphrey Endor
Nathaniel Endor: Doesn't like that gorgeous middle name
Nathaniel Endor: Clearly a good friend
Nathaniel Endor: Made you promise
Nathaniel Endor: Gifted you a hunk of cash to start a business
Nathaniel Endor: Is betrothed to Lady Krome
NPC: Nadia Harwyn, Architect from Gawyne
Nadia Harwyn: Your "gift" to Nathaniel
Nadia Harwin: Will meet with you once a season


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A


Nathaniel Endor


Skill Knowledge:
Politics: Attending Galas
Politics: Accepting Gifts Humbly
Politics: Choosing Friends Over Superiors
Politics: Knowing the Affiliations Between Nobles
Politics: Dressing the Part
Business Management: Accepting the Expertise of a Mine Architect
Business Management: Driving a Hard Bargain
Business Management: Investing in Another's Business
Endurance: Living Through a Carriage Ride with Marshall

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Zi'da: The Holiday Season
Caius: Forever that Ass-Friend
Caius: Interested in Lady Venora
Caius: Future Investment
Caius: Bound to a Promise
Marshall: Likes Sleeping on the Floor
Location: Bellesoir
Location: Venora

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Qit'ria » Fri Feb 09, 2018 3:38 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Heaven and Hell (Part 1)
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Not yet. Zip is talking though, so some foul language...
Requested Rewards - Qit'ria:
Skill Knowledge:
Detection: The sound of chitinous insects moving in the dark
Tactics: Leave fools behind
Tactics: Use terrain your adversaries can't use
Running: Running through high water
Swimming: Diving deeper from the shallows
Swimming: Frog kick style
Field Craft: Lilypads are secured to a stem below water
Endurance: Holding your breath while working underwater
Strength: Pulling a woman out of the water
Strength: Rowing with a stone oar
Detection: The buzzing sound of approaching flying insects

Non-Skill Knowledge - Zipper: Also called Fiona
Swear: Cunt - All things bad, a vagina, or yourself when you're dead.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None yet
Fame: No
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No)

Requested Rewards - Zipper:
Skill Knowledge:

Acrobatics: Taking a great leap forward
Carpentry: Fashioning a paddle
Intelligence: Correcting erroneous assumptions
Intelligence: Reassessing the facts of a situation
Leadership: An inspiration speech about the dubious nature of cunts
Running: Escaping from a horde of Nightmare beasts
Running: Sprinting away from danger
Strength: Yanking away from a strong grip
Strength: Trying to Lift your own body weight up
Tactics: Cutting off the enemy’s advance
Tactics: The ugly necessity of retreat

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None yet
Fame: No
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (No, Zip is already maxed in her magic)

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Krest » Fri Feb 09, 2018 4:24 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Sing into the Storm
City/Area: Orm'del Sea
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Foul language
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Psychology: Experiencing flashbacks
Psychology: Drinking to deal with pain
Psychology: Anger is a powerful motivator
Ranged (Harpoon Launcher): Loading a harpoon
Singing: Emotion makes songs meaningful
Singing: An ode to Wisp

Non-skill Knowledge:
Chrien: Immortal of Storms
Chrien: Thinks Mer are failures and weak
Chrien: Hiding pain
Chrien: Wants Krest to serve
Tidewhisper: Killed Wisp
Tidewhisper: Tribe and home
Humans: Responsible in-part for Wisp's death
Wisp: Lifemate
Wisp: A stubborn Mer
Wisp: Loved land-dwellers and Mer

Loot: Rusalkis Blessing (Approved via PST)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: -4 for shooting a harpoon through a human
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Profession: Songseeker
Renown: +10
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kura Wolfsdotter » Fri Feb 09, 2018 6:53 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Research
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Lots of political rambling
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Politics: Rynmere Noble Houses
Politics: Dealing with Nobility as opposed to Royalty
Politics: Working with outdated information
Research: Getting information from sailors
Research: Extrapolating information from brief summaries
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Neronin » Sat Feb 10, 2018 2:17 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Three Crypts
City/Area: Neronin’s Dreams (Emea)
Notes/Warnings: I’d say it’s pretty graphic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Profession: Museum Curator
Renown: +175
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Medals: 7
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Tio Silver » Sat Feb 10, 2018 12:24 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I Need a Break!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Loosening up the body with a massage
Acrobatics: Avoid getting locked-up muscles
Acrobatics: Sprained shoulders affect mobility
Business Management: A Company Vacation
Endurance: Painful Massages
Medicine: Healing a sprained muscle with a massage


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Yrmellyn Cole » Sat Feb 10, 2018 3:38 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Strange Color Blue
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings:No. Harmless thread. It has been graded for Yanahalqah, now submitting for Yrmellyn.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Painting: Defining the purpose of a painting before
Painting: Choosing a style for a painting
Painting: The many shades of blue
Painting: Mixing oil and pigments to oil color
Leadership: Giving tasks to an apprentice
Leadership: Making an apprentice help with the cleaning after painting
Intimidation: Making an apprentice behave by glaring at them
Investigation: Find out whom a person is going to give their portrait

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: No
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Profession: Mage Painter
Renown: +31
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Medals: 6
Story of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Dungeon Master (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Vhalar 716 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Max » Sat Feb 10, 2018 6:26 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Poorly Played Hand
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Language.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Max:
Gambling: Spades
Negotiation: Securing a Contract
Planning: Kidnapping 101
Deception: Masquerading as an Ally
Deception: Manipulating Trust
Deception: Creating an False Identity
Blades: Point it at the Vulnerable Throat
Intimidation: Compliance Through Threats
Intimidation: Compliance Through Fear
Unarmed Combat: A Kick to the Ribs

Merces:
Becoming: Transformation is Painful
Becoming: New Forms Are Strange
Becoming: Walking on Four Legs
Unarmed Combat: Using Claws as Weapons
Intimidation: Threat of Future Attack Keeps Targets Compliant
Planning: Kidnapping 101
Intimidation: Compliance Through Fear
Defiance: The Guardian Protects Me
Discipline: Kidnapping Instead of Killing


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative (Kidnapping, etc.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Merces.


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