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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Tio Silver » Wed Feb 07, 2018 10:56 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Few Tangles
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Sadly, this thread was abandoned.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Appraisal: Picking a good companion
Business Management: Identifying an opportunity to make money
Deception: "Sure... I'm a team player..."
Deception: Trying to trick someone into becoming your meat-shield
Disguise: Changing forms to avoid being caught
Etiquette: Politely asking someone to be your meat-shield
Navigation: Teading the way through the streets of Scalvoris Town
Navigation: The location of the Scholar's Nook


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Wed Feb 07, 2018 1:06 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Ripper viewtopic.php?f=169&t=4841
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not really, no
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Negotiation: Sex for Goods
Detection: Murder Victims
Investigation: Modus Operandi
Intelligence: Listening to the crowd
Persuasion: Being vouched for
Interrogation: Faking sympathy
Interrogation: Using violence and intimidation
Interrogation: Using blame to get the truth

Loot:no
Injuries/Overstepping:no
Fame: Negative because Kovic was a cock
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No


An abandoned thread that got grades for my partner already. It's not that good, so sorry for whoever reviews this

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Wed Feb 07, 2018 1:21 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: It's just a prank viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6391
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not really, no
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Negotiation: A snack and conversation
Detection: Watching strangers
Psychology: The fear of mortals
Deception: Using Mortalborn abilties to craft a lie
Mortalborn Ability (Ether Lure): Drawing mages
Interrogation: Using restricted information to find out more
Deception: Leading someone into a trap
Negotiation: Working a deal

Magic Discipline: Becoming
Becoming: Works with Totems
Race: Lotharro

Loot: -30 GN
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: Negative for lying and planning for a random stranger to be penetrated by Noth.
Collaboration: Yes, with Fridgar, who is a goner apparently
Magic EXP: Not for Kovic

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Wed Feb 07, 2018 1:32 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dude, where's my goose? viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6594
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Attempted bestiality. Yes. You read that correctly.
Requested Rewards: Mortalborn Ability (Misty Mania): Removing hunger for a clearer mind
Psychology: Finding joy in simple things
Ettiquette: Dressing formal
Ettiquette: Being graceful
Deception: Bending the truth
Negotiation: Adding new stipulation onto a closed deal
Deception: Using a gift for dark deeds

I have the right to ask for more, but I couldn't find anything. If you, dear reviewer, wish to add a few, then go ahead. Otherwise, don't bother. I just want to get me points

Loot: One gladius Noth gifted to Kovic

Fame: Negative. Just read the thread, bro
Collaboration: Yes, with Fridgar and Noth
Magic EXP: No

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Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Wed Feb 07, 2018 2:01 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Who let the dogs out!? viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6403&p=39617#p39530
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A bit of gore. I thought it was quite creepy. Not AF stuff, though.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Psychology: Animalistic Psychology
Medicine: Recognizing malformations
Unnarmed Combat: Breaking a neck
Unnarmed Combat: Restraining an animal’s maws
Mortalborn Ability (Perfect Organism): Kovic’s flesh mutates creatures
Mortalborn Ability (Perfect Organism): Cannot control mutations on other creatures
Acting: Playing it cool
Research: Using live subjects

and anything else you wanna put in there, if you wanna.
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Negative. Stole dogs, fed them fingers, mutated them, and either killed or released them as monsters. Would've gotten way more if the thread continued, but...
Collaboration: Yes. I've got more than 1500 words but I only have 2 posts before the reviewer came in. Not sure if I qualify for 8 knowledges, so if I don't, please delete the last two ones I listed.
Magic EXP: No.

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Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
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Murderer (1) Scandalous (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (3)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Toan » Wed Feb 07, 2018 9:07 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Exchange
City/Area: Etzos, The Outlying Cities
Notes/Warnings: Minor language but nothing major
Requested Rewards:
Gangui
Skill Lores:
  • Negotiation: Necessary Formalities
  • Negotiation: Making clients comfortable.
  • Negotiation: Using leverage
  • Persuasion: Questioning motives
  • Persuasion: Offering them something money can’t buy
  • Persuasion: An appeal to greed
  • Leadership: Commanding Glare
  • Leadership: Motivating Speech
Non-skill Lores:
  • Toan: Reliable
  • Toan: Not susceptible to the truth.

Toan
Skill
  • Intelligence: Children Can Carry Messages
  • Intelligence: Keeping Tabs On Politics
  • Persuasion: Coin Carries More Weight Than Words
  • Discipline: Keeping Composure In Heated Discussions
  • Discipline: Denying Yourself A Tempting Deal
  • Discipline: Showing Restraint From Stabbing Someone
  • Negotiation: Blackmailing To Get Your Way
  • Negotiation: Measuring Value in Bargains

Generic
  • Gangui: The New “Sheriff” In Town
  • Gangui: Has Appearances To Maintain
  • Gangui: Talks Crazy But Makes Sense
  • Gangui: A Completely, Utterly, Insane Buffoon
  • Personal: Worthless Scum… Or Am I?

Loot: A lockbox of gems for Toan, worth 1,800 GN max
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nah bruh, we be discreet about it.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Gangui » Thu Feb 08, 2018 12:26 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Only the Strong
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Harsh rhetoric.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledge
Endurance: Getting Struct by lightening
Discipline: Gathering the pieces of a disordered life
Persuasion: Speaking to a crowd
Rhetoric: Common Sense
Leadership: Starting a faction.
Bastard Sword: Rhetorical Duels
Non-Skill Knowledge
The Sons of Justice
SOJ: Rhetoric
SOJ: Beliefs
SOJ: Foundation in Vhalar 717
SOJ: The Human Spirit

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Scar from getting hit by lightening.
Fame: Positive for recruiting two NPCs. Positive for giving a speech to the mercenaries. Positive for starting patriotic faction.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Profession: Faction Leader
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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Tristan Venora » Thu Feb 08, 2018 1:33 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Birds of a Feather
City/Area: Rynmere/Venora
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:


Sintih

Knowledge:
Deception: Pretending to be someone's servant
Detection: Keeping track of someone by their style of dress
Detection: Recognizing someone by their way of speaking
Discipline: Don't panic when you lose your charge
Discipline: Stave of boredom with a change of location
Etiquette: Apologizing when bumping into people
Etiquette: When interrupting, keep it brief
Etiquette: Keep your employer's secrets like your own

Venora Family: Organised a big charity gala
Sinra Khan: Donated to the Venora charity gala
Tristan Venora: Knows how to charm the ladies
Valeria Burhan: Angered some other noble lady
Elyna Burhan: Whatever happened to her?

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Valeria

Knowledge:
Acting: Playing hard to get
Detection: Spotting social discomfort
Elithem - Eye of the Beholder: Does not work on other Elithem of the same level
Endurance: Keeping things together emotionally
Etiquette: Showing appropriate respect for titles
Persuasion: Offering a beneficial arrangement to another to get them where you want them
Politics: Sometimes it's best to face others rather than hide away after something embarrassing
Rhetoric: Hiding double meanings behind proper conversation
Seduction: Suggestive comments
Seduction: The use of body language

Tristan Venora: Duke of Oakleigh
Tristan Venora: Marked by Zanik
Tristan Venora: Being called 'Your Grace' makes him feel old
Celeste Andaris: Thinks Elithem abilities are magic
Tristan Venora: The king was present at his marking
Xander Andaris: Less outspoken than his wife
Celeste Andaris: A mage attempted to assassinate her
Celeste Andaris: Saw you as a threat to the lives of her and her unborn child
Celeste Andaris: An enemy?

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: probably negative
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Tristan

[googlefont=Roboto]Knowledge:
Elithem - Eye of the Beholder: Does not work on other Elithem of the same level
Etiquette: As a duke you can’t just leave an event you were invited to
Etiquette: Is like playing a game sometimes
Politics: In the current political climate it’s better to be careful
Politics: Don’t anger your allies
Seduction: Tell her you have a lot in common
Seduction: Treat her like a lady
Seduction: Going somewhere private is a good idea
Seduction: Kiss her and lie her down
Stealth: Sneaking away

Valeria Burhan: Beautiful
Valeria Burhan: Open-minded
Valeria Burhan: Marked by Zanik
Celeste Andaris: Thinks Elithem abilities are magic
Celeste Andaris: A mage attempted to assassinate her
Celeste Andaris: Saw Valeria as a threat to the lives of her and her unborn child
Xander Andaris: Less outspoken than his wife
Sintih: Helpful

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: probably positive because Tristan tries to defend Valeria and make Celeste see reason
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Profession: Duke of Oakleigh
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Pioneer (2) Hoarder (1) Right In The Feels (1) Changed (1)
Starting A Family (1) Shopaholic (1) Scandalous (1) Immortal Lover (1)
Puppet Master (1) Pen Pal (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (2)
Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Caius Gawyne » Thu Feb 08, 2018 10:03 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Humoring Family
City/Area: Bellesoir, Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nah.
Requested Rewards:

Darcyanna Venora


Skill Knowledge:
Politics: Finding your feet before others after a moment of giddiness
Politics: Even though someone is family, doesn’t mean you forget their titles
Politics: Making commitments of visitation to allies
Sociology: Dealing with jealous thoughts
Sociology: Admitting official things to others
Sociology: The delight of family affairs

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Tristan Venora: Duke of Oakleigh
Tristan Venora: Your cousin
Tristan Venora: Has a daughter
Tristan Venora: Invited you to his estate
Tristan Venora: Wrote a musical and performed it for the King
Tristan Venora: Thinks you could be an honorary aunt

Caius Gawyne: Said official things about ‘us’ to another person
Caius Gawyne: Has a female friend who likes female...friends.
Caius Gawyne: Has preciously met Tristan

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +3 Hanging with the Duke of Oakleigh, +2 Soirée Socializing
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A


Tristan Venora


Skill Knowledge:
Acting: Looking sad
Deception: Lying about my daughter's mother
Etiquette: Don't eat all the food!
Etiquette: Exchanging pleasantries
Etiquette: Congratulating a couple on their relationship
Politics: If I don't get married, the king might take away my duchy!

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: In a relationship with Darcyanna Venora
Darcyanna Venora: In a relationship with Caius Gawyne
NPC (Fern): Not Caius Gawyne's girlfriend
NPC (Fern): lesbian

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +3 It's good to be a Duke, +2 Soirée Socializing
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope


Caius Gawyne


Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Recognizing the hints of jealousy
Etiquette: How to breach a taboo subject
Etiquette: Polite questions
Politics: Unofficially official
Politics: The intricacies of courting
Politics: Casual conversation with a Duke
Politics: House Venora: Complicated
Politics: Eastern Settlements: Oakleigh

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: +3 Hanging with the Duke of Oakleigh, +2 Soirée Socializing
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: No way.

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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nathaniel Endor » Thu Feb 08, 2018 11:33 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Business Before Pleasure
City/Area: Andaris City, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: There may be a bit of suggestion since they are in the whore house. Nothing to significant there. It's not 50 Shades of Grey I promise.

Requested Rewards:
Nathaniel
    Skill Knowledge (8+1):
      Seduction: Commanding is Sexy
      Politics: Keeping the Relationships Alive
      Politics: House Gawyne and Their Records
      Business Management: Business Meetings can be Fun
      Business Management: Preparing for a Business Alliance
      Resistance: Knowing Not to Pummel the Sard out of a Friend
      Resistance: Solid Alcohol Tolerance
      Linguistics: Basic Rukahi
      Linguistics: Rukahi Curses

    Non-Skill Knowledge:
      House Gawyne: Caius Gawyne
      Noble House: House Gawyne
      Location: Andaris: House of Roses
      Location: Low-Town
      Caius: Old Friend
      Caius: Educated in Books, Not in Women
      Caius: Sleeping with the Common Folk
      House Gawyne: Records Keepers

Loot: -2 GN for Mid'na
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Caius
    Skill Knowledge: (8+1 = 9 lores)
      Discipline: Resisting professional seduction
      Discipline: Continuing a conversation while distracted
      Resistance: The quick burn of vodka
      Resistance: Some liquor for your nerves
      Resistance: Knowing your limits
      Politics: Unusual meeting places
      Politics: House Endor
      Politics: Concluding business before partaking in pleasure
      Seduction: Giving into the charms of strangers

    Non-Skill Knowledge:
      Location: Andaris: House of Roses
      Location: Low-Town
      Noble House: House Endor
      House Endor: Mining is a major part of their economy
      PC: Nathaniel Endor
      Nathaniel Endor: His middle name is Humphrey
      Nathaniel Endor: Ladies’ man
      Nathaniel Endor: Has unusual taste in business meeting locations
      Nathaniel Endor: Friend and troublemaker
      Nathaniel Endor: Respects your work ethic

Loot: -4gn for Janeece and Ivi. Yeah, that happened.
Fame: Reviewer’s discretion! (Positive preferred, though.)
Injuries/Overstepping: Uh, nope.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic XP: Nope.

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