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Review Request 2.1.3

Peer Review Requests
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A spark of kinship
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: swearing and stuff. part 1.
Requested Rewards:
Finn:
Acting: Appearing unfazed by insensitive remarks
Detection: Catching a lie
Deception: Avoiding any suspicion of keeping secrets
Endurance: A long walk along the beach
Defiance: Calming the wind to soothe zipper
Defiance: The voice of the earth is not as clear as the sea’s
Discipline: Listening sincerely and with rapt attention
Caregiving: Giving Zipper some much-needed affection
Zipper: Clueless about matters of love
Zipper: Thinks children are parasites
Zipper: Tired and vulnerable

Zip
Deception: Going off on a tangent to divert attention
Deception: Covering the truth behind insults
Detection: Detecting tension
Endurance: The long walk
Intelligence: Maneuvering the target to tell you what they know
Linguistics: Tailoring your vocabulary for children
Linguistics: Using obscure words
Linguistics: Choosing the right words to make a harsh point
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Finn
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Save a Dance for Me
City/Area: Viden, Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:

Maebella:

Skill Knowledge:
Dancing: The Waltz
Endurance: Outward Appearance in the Face of Discomfort
Endurance: Wearing High Heels
Etiquette: Apologising
Etiquette: Limiting Alcohol Intake
Etiquette: Thinking Before Speaking
Politics: Appropriate Titles
Politics: Society Doesn’t Advance Through Convivial Diversions
Politics: The Videnese Social Elite
Research: Critical Reasoning
Research: Learning to Pass an Exam
Research: Learning for the Sake of Knowledge
Research: Test Scores Show Value and Worth
Rhetoric: Propriety in Conversation
Seduction: Trying to Please a Partner

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Hope Dewispe (NPC): Dean of the Institute of Arts
Viden Academy: Social Functions
Virikai Talius: Does Not Tolerate Being Called “Kai”
Virikai Talius: From a Different World
Virikai Talius: Hasn’t Asked Me to be Something I’m Not
Virikai Talius: Nickname - “Kai”
Virikai Talius: More Money Than Sense

Virikai:

Skill Knowledge:
Dancing: Leading a Partner
Dancing: The Waltz
Discipline: Managing Expectations
Discipline: Refusing to Lash Back
Etiquette: Educating the Socially Awkward
Etiquette: Escorting a Partner
Etiquette: Limiting Alcohol Intake
Politics: Appropriate Titles
Politics: Society Doesn’t Advance Through Convivial Diversions
Politics: The Videnese Social Elite
Research: Critical Reasoning
Research: Learning to Pass an Exam
Research: Learning for the Sake of Knowledge
Research: Test Scores Show Value and Worth

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Hope Dewispe (NPC): Dean of the Institute of Arts
Maebella: Can Conduct Herself Appropriately
Maebella: Defiant and Uncultivated
Maebella: Intelligent Conversational Partner
Maebella: Is not a Complete Disaster
Maebella: Not Part of My World
Maebella: Uncomfortable Dressing Up
Viden Academy: Social Functions


Loot: Deductions mentioned in thread.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Possibly something positive for being good people at this event and stuff?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Storm & The Stillness
City/Area: Prime Antheneum, Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Semi-abandoned thread. Abandoned now, anyway, but we each have 3 posts. It's nerdy.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Bookbinding: Signs of wear on the spine
Bookbinding: Assessing how pages are secured
Investigation: Making an educated guess
Investigation: Direct questions get things done faster
Etiquette: Purposefully annoying
Research: Library organization by subject
Research: The numerical system of call numbers
Research: Keeping a list helps

Non-Skill Knowledges:
PC: Yolande

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Starlight and Ashes
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scal Town
Notes/Warnings: Minor emotional trauma discussed

Requested Rewards:

Delta:

Skill Knowledge (10):
Discipline: Lashing Out
Discipline: Learning to Remain Calm
Discipline: Feeling Humiliated is Challenging
Discipline: Knowing One’s Own Boundaries
Discipline: Take a Deep Breath
Medicine: Emotional Healing
Medicine: Healing Takes Time
Medicine: Personal Limitations
Negotiation: No One Gives Something for Nothing
Seafaring: High Seas Are Dangerous

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Order of the Adunih
Pash: Can Feel My Emotions?
Pash: Empath
Pash: Going on Travels
Pash: Linked to Me?
Pash: Makes Me Feel Comfortable
Pash: Thinks I’m Damaged

Pash:

Skill Knowledge (9):
Detection: Body language as a sign of emotional state
Detection: Knowing when you’re in over your heart
Discipline: Resisting the temptation to manipulate the situation with Empathy
Discipline: Keeping your emotions at bay
Empathy: Sifting through surrounding emotions
Empathy: The color of Agitation
Empathy: The thick cords of emotional trauma
Psychology: Damaged emotions are hard to navigate
Rhetoric: Sharing the truth about magic

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Delta: Not really thrilled to see you
Delta: Still in the Order
Delta: Emotionally damaged
Delta: Probably could use a hug if she’d accept one
Delta: Wary of your friendship


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's Choice!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes for Pash
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Voyage Home
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Language and Suspense
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Running: Pacing Your Stamina
  • Running: Jogging Lasts Longer
  • Climbing: A Way Out of A Corner
  • Climbing: Using Rocks Within Walls
  • Climbing: Don't Let Heights Intimidate You
  • Climbing: Using Ledges
Generic
  • Personal: Leaving Foster's Landing Temporarily
  • Personal: The Plan Trip to Rharne
  • Quest: The Voyage Home
  • Personal: Almost Caught
  • Crowley: A Good Man
  • Crowley: Is Worried About You
  • Crowley: Will Lay Low in Foster's Landing
  • Crowley: Is Waiting for You to Return
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing too severe
Fame: Up to you
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A spark of kinship
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: swearing and stuff. part 2.
Requested Rewards:
Finn
Endurance: Surviving an Ether Missile to the soul
Endurance: Being beaten up by all the orphans
Endurance: Crashing into the ground over and over
Defiance: Ignoring the warnings of the elements
Discipline: Resisitng the allure of an impossible lie
Transmutation: Initiation
Transmutation: Mutations vary between etherists
Transmutation: The Discipline of the World
Transmutation: Identity
Transmutation: Digging into the physical makeup of a pebble
Location: Emea
Location: Emean Etzos
Location: Emean Home
Location: The Garden With The Roses
Zaira: Mother
Djevelli: Father
Narav: Little Emean Brother?
Fiona: Little Emean Sister?
Fiona: Sharing her spark with you

Zipper
Deception: Answering questions with questions
Deception: Denying a response
Intimidation: Being brutally honest about a painful task
Linguistics: Waxing poetic about magic
Leadership: Offering firm guidance
Leadership: Providing accurate information for a difficult task ahead
Leadership: Providing emotional support
Leadership: Urging caution
Transmutation: Conducting your first initiation
Transmutation: Checking for a successful spark implantation

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Finn will be shaky, physically traumatized, and a bit out of it for about 10 trials
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Return Home
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Bleeeeh
Requested Rewards:
Generic
  • Personal: The Feeling of Home
  • Personal: Feeling Alone in the World
  • Personal: Missing Your Brother
  • Ri'ku: Didn't Know Where You Went
  • Ri'ku: Reminds You Good Things
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Caius Gawyne
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Joined: Wed Nov 01, 2017 11:31 pm
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Profession: Arbitrary Lord
Renown: 164
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The line between
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Semi-abandoned, two seasons back. Just thought I'd clean house. Both of us have more than 3 posts anyway. Some things just lose momentum. No hard feelings.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Etiquette: It helps to get names correct
Etiquette: Polite interruption
Navigation: Asking directions
Navigation: All these halls look the fekking same
Rhetoric: University gossip
Rhetoric: Witty innuendo
Sociology: Noble impressions
Sociology: Having an unusual lineage

Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC: Aeodan Burnett
Aeodan: Linguistic Anthropology Student
Aeodan: Full of reluctant wit
NPC: Professor Herlinger: Qi'ora
NPC: Professor Verigan: Professor of Religious Studies at Rynmere University
NPC: Professor Verigan: Focused on Immortals whose spheres directly impact mortals in a negative way
NPC: Professor Verigan: Doesn't like unpunctuality
NPC: Professor Verigan: Caius is his research assistant (maybe)

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes, with Aeodan
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Just a bit of light reading
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Semi-abandoned, two seasons back. Just thought I'd clean house. Both of us have more than 3 posts anyway. I could close it out, but I couldn't think of a proper ending. Some things just lose momentum. No hard feelings.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Bookbinding: Limitations of rebinding
Bookbinding: Knowing when to reprint or when to rebind
Bookbinding: Glue becomes brittle over time
Intimidation: Referencing a higher authority
Intimidation: A dry sense of humor is often misinterpreted
Seduction: Finding a common interest
Rhetoric: Casual small talk with strangers
Rhetoric: Self-deprecating apologies

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC: Penelope
PC: Seth Albertson

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: Yes, with Seth
Magic EXP: No
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