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Sephira
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: An Uninvited Guest
City/Area: Scalvoris Town/ Redwood Redoubt
Notes/Warnings: Simple sword practice solo
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Saber) : Right Shoulder Guard Stance
Blades (Saber) : Lower Left Guard Stance
Blades (Saber): High Guard Stance
Blades (Saber): Parrying is more efficient than blocking
Blades (Saber): Pressing your advantage after a parry
Acrobatics: Flexibility helps extend the range of your attack

Non-Skill Knowledge
NPC: Jax : Flame Assistant
Location: Redwood Redoubt : Command Post for the Flame Troops

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Tower on the Mount
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Dreams, not applicable.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 35
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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Patrick
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Dark Shadows
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Was close to being done
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Seduction: Bravery Can Be A Turn On
  • Seduction: Building The Anticipation
  • Seduction: Desire Is A Dangerous Weapon
  • Discipline: Suppressing Urges To Feed
  • Discipline: Controlling The Sessfiend's Hunger
  • Deception: Pretending Your Innocent
  • Deception: Alibis Are Handy
  • Philosophy: Always Repay Favors
  • Seduction: Teasing In A Variety of Ways
Generic
  • Personal: Committed Murder
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 84
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Patrick
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Wrapping Up Loose Ends
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Was close to being done
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Writing: Learning to Convey Sincerity
  • Writing: Letter Writing Is Convenient
  • Writing: Goodbyes Are Easier With Letters
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 51
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Decode
City/Area: Outer Territories of Eztos/Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Linguistics: Studying Foreign Texts
  • Linguistics: Orimartsun Runes
  • Research: Learn How A Language Works
  • Research: References Between Meanings and Runes
  • Research: Understanding the Differences In Languages
  • Research: Overcoming Language Barriers Through Study
Generic
  • Crowley: Happy to Teach
  • Crowley: Has Studied The Orimatsu Extensively
  • Crowley: A Good Teacher and Good Friend
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 82
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Bad Bird's Dirty Work /viewtopic.php?f=169&t=9929
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
NOTH:
Intelligence: Knowledge is Power
Business Management: Hiring Contractors for Work
Business Management: Knowing When to Hit Competitors.
Business Management: Lowballing Prices for Best Deals
Business Management: Don't Go Too Low, Or You Won't Get Work.
Intimidation: Blocking Exits

Yana:
Tactics: preparing an escape route
Tactics: sometimes retreat is the best option
Tactics: Always be wary of threatening presences
Tactics: monitoring the distance between yourself and someone else
Discipline: steeling your nerves
Deception: making your name sound more mundane
Deception: changing the topic to distract
Deception: if you seem trustworthy, you get paid up front
Intelligence: discussing sensitive topics in private draws attention
Intelligence: asking around

Loot: +300GN for Yana, -300gn for Noth
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: maybe
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic EXP: (/No)
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word count: 149
"Speaking" - Thinking - "Others speaking"
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Liberty Meet Tyranny
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Seductive Attempts. Ended abruptly. It's not being resumed, and it's been months, so I'm putting it up for review.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Focus on the Goal
Meditation: Ignore Distractions
Meditation: Resist Offered Alcohol
Meditation: Do Not Give in to Harlots
Meditation: You Will Not be Lead Like a Dog
Business Management: Making Offers and Deals
Business Management: Finding Trade Partners
Business Management: Smaller Groups Are More Likely to Work With You
Business Management: Smuggling is a Business Too

Loot: N/A (Might have spent a lil money, but it's been so long that I can't remember at all.)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: -1 Being Seen in a Brothel
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 132
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Virikai Talius
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Flight of the Fallen
City/Area: Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linika:
Acting: Exaggerated Courtesy.
Chemistry: Confirming the Long Shelf Life of Frageon.
Deception: Manipulating Chemical Stock to Appear Efficient.
Deception: Suggesting a Task That Will Cover Past Mischief.
Intelligence: Gauging a Rival's Reaction to the Truth for Information.
Intelligence: Risking Reprimand to Learn Where You Truly Stand.
Persuasion: Admitting a Lie, But Only to Others Involved in it.
Psychology: A Snarky Past Makes Present Honesty Rarely Believed.
Xypha: Telepathic Comm.: Ideas and Concepts Can Also be Sent

Virikai: Blessed by Yvithia
Virikai: Monitored by His Father


Virikai:
Discipline: Refusing to Retaliate when Offended
Intimidation: Use of Blackmail
Persuasion: Offering Your Services
Persuasion: The Value of Attributes
Persuasion: Thinly Veiled Threats
Rhetoric: Talking Around the Issue
Teaching: Experience Complements Theory
Teaching: Keep Your Skills Current
Teaching: Offering to Support Another

Linika: Blessed By Yvithia
Linika: Playing the Long Game
Linika: Whose Side is She On?

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Wolfgang, Part II
City/Area: The North Woods near Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Just a continuation from the job thread I did last season. I wanted to extend it and get some much needed skill writing done. Finally got around to finishing the placeholder, and now the thread titles finally make sense.
Requested Rewards:

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges: 6 total
Field Craft: Setting up camp near a water source
Field Craft: Preparing the site of a fire
Field Craft: Staying in a tree for the night
Field Craft: Shielding a weak flame with your hands
Endurance: Pushing past your limits
Ranged (Shortbow): Smacking an enemy with your bow

Non-skill Knowledges:
Location: The North Woods

Loot: None, but I'm letting it be assumed that the wolves managed to rip the deer down and ruin it.
Injuries/Overstepping: Some cuts and scrapes.
Fame: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Thwarted at Every Turn
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Blades: Quick kill when needed.
Blade: Drawing sword as you move
Hunting: Boar tracks
Hunting: Horse tracks
Strength: Carrying a thwarthog
Strength: Carrying a child on your shoulders.


Loot: None +1 thwarthog
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Helped the caravan folks, saved Qit'ria's scrawny hide. Saved the kiddie. Yes please!
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Qit'ria

Knowledge:
Tactics: Present your arms in a peaceful manner when wishing to be received hospitably
Tactics: A numbers advantage is usually beneficial
Hunting: Recognizing boar tracks
Hunting: Recognizing horse tracks
Tactics: Use speed when surprise isn't an option
Hunting: Recognizing a limp in tracks
Detection: Recognizing a little girl's scream
Thrown (javelin): Using the speed of your running to aid you
Climbing: Locking your ankles around a branch

Loot: No, job thread
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: helped the group.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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