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Edalene
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Lowest of the Low
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Thread was abandoned.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Leadership: Acting on morals
Leadership: Standing up for the downtrodden

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Tristan Venora
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: [Eastern Trench]The teaching boat
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Tristan is sick and behaving strangely!
Requested Rewards:
Sintih
Knowledge:
Alchemy: A cloak as hard a schainmail
Alchemy: Use specialized equipment, not your kitchen
Business management: Delegate
Business management: The rival of my rival is my friend
Intelligence: Listen in on your boss' conversations
Intelligence: Read the reports
Politics: dealing with boring people every trial
Politics: Royally assigned invader
Politics: New duchies in Rynmere
Politics: Use locals to govern locals
Politics: Make people owe you before putting them in power

Rynmere: The noble houses
Rynmere: Oakleigh: Landlocked
Rynmere: People are too stupid to distinguish magic

Tristan: Seasick
Tristan: hates boats
Tristan: met with Celesta Andaris
Tristan: Has multiple doppelgangers
Tristan: Pimp?
Tristan: Pro magic
Valeria Burhan: Incredibly beautiful, unmarried woman

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Sintih helps Tristan and gives him a lot of good advice, so maybe?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Tristan
Knowledge:

Alchemy: Making living light sources
Alchemy: Use specialized equipment, not your kitchen
Alchemy: Explosions are dangerous if you don't know what you are doing
Discipline: Not taking your anger out on your bodyguard
Politics: Delegating is a good idea
Politics: As a politician you often have to deal with boring people
Politics: Use locals to govern locals
Politics: Make people owe you before putting them in power
Politics: Make people you trust your advisors!
Politics: Advisors shouldn't say yes to everything, but challenge you
Politics: Magicism: Like racism, but against mages


Sintih: Doesn't get seasick
Sintih: Likes chemistry, drawing and languages
Sintih: Knows alchemy
Sintih: Doesn't want me to find him a boyfriend or girlfriend
Sintih: Already has someone
Sintih: I asked him to be my advisor

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Tristan asked Sintih to be his advisor. Do you get renown for that?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Saving the Farmers Daughter
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Event thread discontinued as Golem has left. However outcome was already been discussed with Golem (not to rescue everyone or foil the aukari, damage done to them shouldn't be significant anyway) and thread was completed accordingly.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Tactics: Usefulness of the logistical information of enemy forces
  • Meditation: How to not expose yourself as an aukari in a fiery beacon
  • Etiquette: Do not ask for assistance from a position of inability
  • Disguise: Even if you have to get it from their cold, dead hands
  • Mount: Woodland creatures to get through the woods
  • Mount: Travel in a formation makes it easier for the group
  • Linguistics: The easiest way to assimilate into a group
  • Unarmed (Grappling): Pile on the one guy
Loot: Cheap food for life, wohoo! Whatever trophies Nauta could realistically have gotten and made off with.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: See thread's title for what for, lol, and probably a few of the people lucky enough to get away after causing some chaos in the raider's camp (which probably didn't last long enough to mess with them unfortunately) Some useful information given to the authorities though most of should be useless/worthless because of time.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: (Yes/No)
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Virikai Talius
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Celebration
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Gaslighting.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Maebella (11)
Discipline: Fighting Against Your Lover
Discipline: Removing Emotions from the Equation
Endurance: Keeping a Sense of ‘Self’
Logistics: Learning When to Share Knowledge
Persuasion: Appeal to Another’s Compassion
Politics: Always in the Public Eye
Politics: What it is to be a Lord’s Wife
Rhetoric: Sharing Your Past with Your Future
Seduction: Discomfort May Be Worth It
Seduction: Dressing Up
Seduction: Putting in the Effort

Celebration: Anagénnisi
Rynmere: Duchy of Venora
Rynmere: Makes Whiskey


Virikai (11)
Discipline: Doing What You Don’t Want to Do
Discipline: Fighting Against Your Lover
Intimidation: Deceptively Soft Tones
Intimidation: Glacial Expressions
Intimidation: Use of Aggression
Leadership: Inventive Punishments
Persuasion: Reasoning with Someone
Persuasion: Using Logical Arguments
Seduction: Using Compliments
Teaching: Punishment as a Teaching Mechanism
Teaching: The Consequences of Miscommunication

Celebration: Anagénnisi
Rynmere: Duchy of Venora
Rynmere: Makes Whiskey
Xypha: Awareness of Emotions



Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: This isn't my camp
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
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Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Sometimes, it's really hard not to thump someone.
Fletching: Regular practice helps to iron out bad habits
Intimidation: Speak your threat in as many languages as possible
Intimidation: Be clear how far you're going to hit them and how bad they'll look after
Leadership: Shouting a greeting, rather than messing about

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Arlo

Knowledge:
Cooking: Pheasant on a spit
Cooking: Loaded potatoes
Detection: Spotting when people are watching
Discipline: Not laughing, even when it's really funny.
Discipline: Don't get in between two scrapping women.
Psychology: Women behave differently than men, especially when there's an uneven number.

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Qit'ria

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Jumping down from a tree
Climbing: Try to not disturb tree branches too much when seeking a hiding spot
Detection: The sound of crashing branches and rumbling ground of large beasts moving
Hunting: Extreme heat will lead many differing animals to drink together
Hunting: Most heavily used game trails lead to water
Hunting: Sneak attacks against heavily armored creatures might be best
Running: Maintaining balance while running downhill
Stealth: Taking the roundabout route to avoid stumbling into sight
Stealth: Recognizing when your scent has been detected
Tactics: Retreat when surprise attack fails
Tactics: Observe potential threats from a distance before approaching

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Arlo: Dark haired man who cooks delicious food
Arlo: Mother in Rharne
Arlo: Devotee to Cassion
Arlo: Requires no compensation to share a meal
Arlo and Vega: Traveled to Desnind together
Arlo and Vega: May return to Desnind one day
Arlo and Vega: Absolutely not sharing a tent together
Vega: Red haired angry woman
Vega: Insulting Arlo in her presence results in violence
Vega: Full of threats
Cassion Followers: Storytellers and travelers
Familiar: The weaselbear might actually be a badger

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Kasoria
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: I. No Skips, No Excuses
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language (par the course, really)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Not Skipping Exercise
Discipline: Altering a Workout, But Never Shirking It
Strength: Push Ups
Strength: Sit ups
Unarmed Combat: Leopard Punch
Unarmed Combat: Kidney Strike


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dreams & Devotion
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
None, as she's asleep for most of it.

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Arlo

Knowledge:
Endurance: Staying awake when warm and fed
Endurance: Maintaining concentration when tired.
Sojourn Ability: Safe Camp: Put blood to mark the area
Sojourn Ability: Safe Camp: Provides psychological security
Sojourn Ability: Safe Camp: Allows for more restful sleep
Sojourn Ability: Souvenir: Use blood to dedicate your Souvenir
Sojourn Ability: Souvenir: Ensure that the item has relevance / importance to you.
Sojourn Ability: Souvenir: Personal to you

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Lavana Tharn
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Basic Sword
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City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?) Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Strength; Using sword form as a target muscle work out.

Strength; The slower the movements the more intense the work out.

Discipline; Hard work pays off.

Blades Two Handed Claymore; Sword play while moving backwards.

Blades Two Handed Claymore; Fighting while maintaining distance with foot work.

Blades Two Handed Claymore; Wider stance allows better sword swings.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Rorom
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Swimming against the Current.
City/Area: The seas around Ne'haer.
Notes/Warnings: Piscaphobia.
Requested Rewards: 10 Points for solo thread
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge:
Seafaring: Moving into and out of proximity to whirlpools.
Negotiation: Establishing trust with mer.
Strength: Rowing against a current isn't the best for resistance training.

Non-Skill:
Mer: Can swim in elbow-locking formation
Mer: Can speak in your mind.

Loot: An old old bounty that goes for 25 gn (I looked into it and found the original bounty in Ne'Haer.)
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope.
Renown: +2 for helping a tribe of mer.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: As the sun rises
City/Area: Scalvoris Harbor
Notes/Warnings: Nah. We cute.

Requested Rewards:
Kali'rial
Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Smelling emotions
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): How to punch
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): How to protect your thumbs
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Picking a tender spot to hit
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): How to follow through with your body
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Fist-to-flesh contact can actually hurt

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Pash: Has a magic gemstone that can provide some armour
Pash: Smells like emotions
Pash: Taught you how to punch
Pash: Knows you worry about him

Sarkis: Thinks Pash smelts salty
Sarkis: Loves you as his blessed

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No
Pash Raj'oriq
Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Investigating magical devices
Detection: Understanding how an item works
Empathy: Shifting between different feelings in your own tangle quickly
Empathy: Strumming a single thread for identification
Teaching: Preparing someone else for unarmed combat
Teaching: Professional tips
Teaching: Always compliment your pupil on a job well done
Teaching: Asking the right questions to spark understanding

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Kali'rial: Has a gemstone that lets her smell emotions
Kali'rial: Fiesty student
Schupert's Gem: Offers protection like invisible leather armor

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: Yes, for using Empathy in a new way.
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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