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Virikai Talius
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Thread Name: The Facts of Life
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Sexual undertones
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Maebella Arval
Etiquette: Being Naked Around Slaves is Bad
Research: How to Revise
Research: Objective vs Subjective
Research: Studying in Bed?
Research: You Don’t Need Proof
Seduction: Positive Mood Helps
Seduction: Staying Naked
Teaching: Requires Interested Students

Literature: Oral Narratives
Literature: Plays
Literature: Poetry
Literature: Prose
Literature: Rhyming Helps to Remember
Oral Narratives: Ballad Traditions
Oral Narratives: Can Convey More than Written Word
Oral Narratives: Gesture is Important
Oral Narratives: Voice is Important


Virikai Talius
Leadership: Having Another’e best Interests at Heart
Persuasion: Using Logic
Persuasion: Using Positive Rewards
Seduction: Butterfly Kisses
Seduction: Erogenous Location: Inner Thighs
Seduction: Erogenous Location: Lower Torso
Seduction: Staying Naked
Teaching: Carrot and Stick Method
Teaching: The Value of Revision
Teaching: Teach Students to Teach Themselves


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: Nope
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Thread Name: Post Gangui Jail Disorder
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Yana lores
Investigation: Deduction
Investigation: connecting the dots
Investigation: filling the blanks
Investigation: taking notice of agitation in people
Interrogation: Asking questions
Deception: Answering questions with a question
Endurance: lying on an uncomfortable surface
Endurance: the pain from an unexpected slap

Zipper lores
Attunement: Note: Unknown (Yludih)
Attunement: Using Attunement as a vague, semi-reliable lie detector
Endurance: Headbutting a Yludih
Investigation: Asking questions
Investigation: Confirming the facts
Investigation: Connecting the dots
Investigation: Getting the details
Unarmed Combat: Slapping to demoralize
Unarmed Combat: A perfect headbutt to the temple

Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: nu
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Not enough. no
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Between Hills and Falling Skies
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Ali's crazy mindscape

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 Knowledges for Ali

Politics: Ideologies
Leadership: Disregard empathy for one's people
Leadership: Rule to accomplish your ideals
Leadership: The happiness of the people comes with the realization of ideals
Leadership: Good leaders can change things on an individual level
Leadership: Ideology gives legitimacy to power

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Virikai Talius
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Thread Name: Needs Must
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Maebella Arval
Discipline: Doing What You Don't Want To Do
Linguistics: Idioms
Linguistics: Literal vs Metaphorical
Persuasion: Begging
Persuasion: Use of Emotions
Politics: Deferring to Another
Politics: Don't Embarrass Your Lordling Partner
Teaching: Can be Fun

Leni: Language of Ellune


Virikai Talius
Discipline: Carefully Schooled Expression
Discipline: Holding Back Thoughts
Discipline: Ignoring Others' Emotions
Discipline: Remaining Silent
Discipline: Standing Your Ground
Intimidation: Less is More
Leadership: Quiet Control
Leadership: Leaving No Room for Argument
Politics: Protecting Those You Care For


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: Nope
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Nightshade Eld
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Thread Name: Wretch
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: A memory thread, so you know it's not going to be happy. None of Night's memory threads ever are.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Different kinds of pain
Medicine: Poisons typically have cures
Resistance: Food poisoning
Resistance: Throwing up doesn’t help
Resistance: Shivers
Resistance: Convulsions

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Victor Amielle
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Thread Name: Keep Breathing
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:

Alistair

Knowledge:
Necromancy: Protocol on a new body
Necromancy: Some minions may not animate correctly
Necromancy: Withering the neck can lead to nigh-instant death
Necromancy: Using protocol to scout and secure an area
Strength: Using strength to add piercing power to weapons
Running: Skirting spherically
Running: Running and stealth can go hand in hand
Running: Running into a descending lunge
Stealth: Crouching behind a brush to stealthily coordinate
Stealth: Mobility and stealth are not incompatible
Stealth: Standing light on your soles
Stealth: Remaining in dark lighting is essential

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: yes


Victor

Knowledge:
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Can be hurled like a javelin
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Corrodes objects it crashes against
Transmutation: Ether Missile: Feels hot and cold at the same time
Transmutation: Casting multiple spells in quick succession can lead to overstepping
Strength: Pushing a body away from you
Tarouz Ability: Feathered Friend: Good for Scouting
Tarouz Ability: Feathered Friend: Can be used to distract your enemies
Tarouz Ability: Feathered Friend: Allows you to communicate with your familiar through a mental link
Tarouz Ability: Wings of Steel: Can be used to deflect attacks
Tarouz Ability: Wings of Steel: Requires strength and endurance
Blades (Shortsword): Thrust
Blades (Shortsword): Striking a second time to make sure your enemy is really dead

Alistair: Rupturer
Alistair: Took me back to Lysoria

Loot: Yes. Alistair has decided to leave all the loot to Victor. What and how much he gets is up to you!
Injuries/Overstepping: Victor is exhausted, and he might be a little sore as well.
Renown: Yes, for killing bandits.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: yes

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Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

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Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Alistair
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Thread Name: The Call of the Shrike
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Pure narration of Alistair's train of thought.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 Knowledges for Ali

Hunting: Preying on a high volume killer
Tactics: Setting up a multi-step strategy
Tactics: Utilizing a foe's routine against them
Tactics: Preparing an all-inclusive assault
Tactics: Setting up for an ambush
Leadership: People need security

Lilith Odam: The Lady of the Maw
Lilith Odam: Her Story
Lilith Odam: A Revealed Aberrant
Lilith Odam: Not affiliated with the Coven
Lilith Odam: Must die for mages to be trusted
Lilith Odam: One of the great mages of the world

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Relief Effort 8: Moving
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Business Management: Ethical business practices
Business Management: Do what is right, whether you get paid for it or not.
Logistics: Look at things from a different angle when problem solving.
Persuasion: Putting forward an argument on paper.
Persuasion: Choosing who you make your argument to.


Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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Han Hetra
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Thread Name: Rabbit Season
City/Area: Woods outside of Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Dead wabbits
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hunting: The Element of Surprise
Hunting: Rabbits are Wary Creatures
Hunting: Turkeys are Idiots
Hunting: Scouting Ahead for Shelter
Hunting: Using Natural Cover
Discipline: Necessary for Success
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope
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Alistair
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Devourer: Part One
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Meh. I wrote it all on my phone on the bus, so it kinda sucks.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 Knowledges for Ali

Investigation: Searching a murder scene
Investigation: Finding a note at a crime scene
Investigation: Summarizing your findings
Animal Training: Llewnos are feisty if untrained
Animal Training: Strength can deter animals to rebel
Animal Training: Offering food to keep animals compliant

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Small or... hopefully medium please? He's announced that he's going to be hunting and killing one of West Idalos' greatest villains - to a town that she recently preyed on. And, they even sent word to other towns that someone was going to try and put her down.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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