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Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Caius Gawyne » Wed Feb 14, 2018 1:25 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Home / Work
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Feels and stuff.

Requested Rewards:

Caius Gawyne


Skill Knowledge (8+1=9):
Deception: Changing the subject
Discipline: Burying the hurt
Leadership: The power of delegation
Leadership: Paying for services well-rendered
Research: Finding the oldest, most reliable source
Research: Cross-referencing information
Research: Questioning absolutes
Research: Separating truth from folklore
Research: Keeping an objective mind with subjective material

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Religion: Immortals: Daia, Immortal of Companionship, Prosperity, Tailoring, and Dance
Religion: Immortals: Daia, the Immortal who died
Religion: Immortals: Ziell's love for Daia
Religion: Immortals: Ralaith, Immortal of Wisdom, Bitterness, Time, and Bears
Religion: Immortals: Ziell, Ralaith, and Daia's strange relationships
Religion: Originals: Those who came before the Immortals
Religion: Originals: Creators of the Immortals?
Location: Rented Home in Andaris (above Ink and Prophet)
Darcyanna Venora: Pours herself into her music
Darcyanna Venora: Looks perfect in your home

Loot: -6gn for friends moving a piano
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.


Darcyanna Venora


Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Don’t falter, don’t let your pain show
Politics: Bravery in the face of adversity
Musical Instrument (Piano): Playing whilst singing
Musical Instrument (Piano): Key changes
Musical Instrument (Piano): Writing for lyrical accompliment
Musical Instrument (Piano): Testing for tuning

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius Gawyne: Sneakily moved you to your new home
Caius Gawyne: Has some cool friends
NPC: Lly’en - Sev’ryn
Location: Home in Andaris (above the Ink and Prophet)

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes!
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Posts: 363
Joined: Wed Nov 01, 2017 7:31 pm
Location: Andaris
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Lord Arbiter
Fame: +133
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Medals: 5
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (2) First Kiss (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Sephira » Wed Feb 14, 2018 2:20 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Flame in the Dark
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Sephira works with the Flame Troops to apprehend a criminal.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: The Pull of the Spark
Rupturing: New Mutation: Realizes emotion can effect her magic
Rupturing: The Use of Skystepping
Deception: Lying to get answers
Endurance: Chasing a Criminal
Detection: Realizing the criminal had fled

Non-Skill Knowledge
Faction: The Flame Troops : Specialist branch of the Elements

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive for catching a criminal necromancer
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP:Yes

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Scarlet Sorceress
 
Posts: 103
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2017 2:40 pm
Location: Scalvoris
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Sorcerer
Fame: +30
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Medals: 3
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Supporter (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Wed Feb 14, 2018 2:34 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Commensalism viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6535
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Not really.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Persuasion: Calming someone
Negotiation: Not settling for low quality
Tactics: Taking advantage
Business Management: Sales through theatrics
Detection: Identifying a meal’s ingredients
Acting: Dramatism
Persuasion: Destroying fear and doubt through eloquence
Deception: Ironic lie

Loot: -3 silvers. Please don't make me update the CS q.q
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: I'd rather have it be negative, even if publically Paplo was a nice fellow. He was plotting to eat her! That has to count.
Collaboration: Yes, with In'ira. I contacted her and she says she's gonna retire her, and that she wants no rewards. Even if the thread was never finished, it has a proper stopping point, and it's an enjoyable read.
Magic EXP: No.

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Kovic
Devour life itself.
 
Posts: 356
Joined: Fri Jun 03, 2016 9:16 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Maneater
Fame: -108
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Letters
Medals: 13
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Mentor (1) One Arc Later... (1) Pioneer (1)
Murderer (1) Scandalous (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (2)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Wed Feb 14, 2018 3:05 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Warning: Do not ingest viewtopic.php?f=169&t=6345
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence, death, cannibalism, gore. Fucking dope, if you ask me.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Faking one’s death
Stealth: Tailing someone
Stealth: Blending with the environment
Stealth: Assessing risk of being discovered
Tactics: Hit and run
Running: Sprinting
Mortalborn Ability (Perfect Organism): Making bone daggers
Mortalborn Ability (Perfect Organism): Ingesting Kovic causes mutations
Tactics: Improvisation
Psychology: Routine-driven individuals
Unarmed combat: Throat Strike

Dunno if I understand the review system. If these knowledges are too many, just remove from the bottom. kpeaceoutbye

Loot: A follower.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Negative. Just read the thread.
Collaboration: Yes, with Gar'rek. Easily one of my favorite threads with Kovic. This thread opens a new path for Kovic, and I'm hella excited to get it graded. Gar'rek was an amazing partner. Sadly, he's retiring this PC, and requests no rewards. The possibility was discussed of him being NPCed as a follower of Mammon/Paplo/Kovic, but nah.
Magic EXP: NOOOOOOPe.


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Kovic
Devour life itself.
 
Posts: 356
Joined: Fri Jun 03, 2016 9:16 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Maneater
Fame: -108
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Player Review
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Letters
Medals: 13
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Mentor (1) One Arc Later... (1) Pioneer (1)
Murderer (1) Scandalous (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (2)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kovic » Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:10 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Pedestrians on the Storm viewtopic.php?f=88&t=3124
City/Area: Ironridge, Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Violence, yes.
Requested Rewards:

Kovic


Just my points, and negative fame if you can spare it.

Dionysia

Skill Knowledge:
Navigation: Knowing The Road Routes of the Area
Politics: Educate Yourself On Allies Before Meetings
Animal Training: Calming A Great Ironridge Tiger
Animal Training: Sometimes Trained Animals Won't Always Listen
Interrogation: Using A Giant Beast To Get Information
Investigation: Don't Trust A Stranger In The Woods
Unarmed Combat: Remain At The Ready Around Strangers
Intimidation: Threaten Captives With Death By Tiger

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Ne'haer: Road Routes Within The Surrounding Areas



Loot: I think none.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: I bet it's positive for Dionysia, but you'll have to be the judge of that.
Collaboration: Yes. With Dionysia.
Magic EXP: No

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Kovic
Devour life itself.
 
Posts: 356
Joined: Fri Jun 03, 2016 9:16 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Maneater
Fame: -108
Character Sheet
Prophets' Notes
Player Review
Templates
Letters
Medals: 13
Character of the Month (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
Guild Master (1) Mentor (1) One Arc Later... (1) Pioneer (1)
Murderer (1) Scandalous (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Lol Worthy (2)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Nightshade Eld » Wed Feb 14, 2018 10:36 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Wing Beats
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: I got bored during a couple of my classes today and I'm still trying to get back into the swing of being active, so I did this. No particular warnings since nothing bad happens. Feed back is much appreciated.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Meditation: Useful for wing control
Meditation: Practicing individual muscle movements
Meditation: Controlled breathing
Strength: Weight lifting
Strength: Bearing the weight of Wings of Valence armor
Strength: Practicing till you’re in pain

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A

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Nightshade Eld
Approved Character
 
Posts: 556
Joined: Wed Aug 10, 2016 1:43 pm
Location: Etzos
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Mercenary/Cartography Assistant
Fame: +308
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Medals: 20
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Ambassador (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1) Hoarder (1) Right In The Feels (1)
First Kiss (1) History Repeated (1) Enemy of My Enemy (1) Legend In Waiting (1)
Vhalar 716 (1) Holiday Event 2016 (1) Cylus 717 Thread Challenge (1) Cylus 717 PC/Dev Challenge (1)
Cylus 717 All Star (1) Crush The Reviews! 717 (1) Event Medal (2)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Charlie Warrick » Wed Feb 14, 2018 11:14 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Baby It's Cold Outside
City/Area: Venora
Notes/Warnings: It's cute. Cute flirty cute.
Requested Rewards:

Charlie
Discipline: Attempting to do the proper thing even when you don't want to
Etiquette: Waiting for others to leave before personal conversations
Leadership: Making someone tell you how they feel about you
Politics: Using correct titles even with your lover
Politics: How to address the staff

Oliver Venora: The Consummate Politician
Oliver Venora: You are proud of him
Oliver Venora: Writes poetry for you
Oliver Venora: You are enough for him

Oliver
Discipline: Retaining one’s composure in front of a nude lover
Etiquette: Giving credit where it is due
Etiquette: Following through on one’s obligations
Etiquette: Waiting until others are gone to be mushy
Politics: Relaxing the part of Lord out of public purview
Politics: Successfully executing a charity event
Rhetoric: Reciting poetry
Seduction: Using poetic words to seduce someone

Charlie Warrick: Wants to be enough for you
Charlie Warrick: Cares about you
Charlie Warrick: Looks good nude
Charlie Warrick: Spent the night with you

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Charlie Warrick
Show me my place in all this.
 
Posts: 91
Joined: Mon Dec 04, 2017 7:07 pm
Race: Human
Fame: +87
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Medals: 5
First Love (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1) Right In The Feels (2) First Kiss (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Kayleigh » Thu Feb 15, 2018 2:01 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Let's Start A Riot
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Never really lifted off unfortunately.
Requested Rewards:
  • Song: Song of the Exile
  • Instrument (Harp): Composition of Melodies
  • Instrument (Harp): Inspiration Found From Environment
  • Singing: Singing Loudly With Clarity
  • Singing: Clear Vocals Carry Far
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nurp
Fame: Street performance
Collaboration: Was meant to be, but no
Magic EXP: No

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Kayleigh
"Live fiercely, love passionately."
 
Posts: 166
Joined: Tue Dec 06, 2016 4:28 am
Location: Rynmere
Race: Human
Profession: Singer, Wanderer
Fame: +49
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Letters
Medals: 1
One Arc Later... (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Patrick » Thu Feb 15, 2018 2:17 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: With Fist and Thunder
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: "Ancient history" for those who get the reference. ;)
Requested Rewards:
Generic
  • Personal: Facing Uncertain Death

Skill
  • Leadership: Shepherding Others to Safety
  • Weapon (Broadsword): The Weight of a Broadsword
  • Weapon (Broadsword): Basic Strikes
  • Weapon (Broadsword): Angled Strikes
  • Weapon (Broadsword): Better Suited For One Hand
  • Weapon (Broadsword): Footwork is Important
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nurp
Fame: Idk
Collaboration: Past Event
Magic EXP: No

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Patrick
Irredeemable Drunkard
 
Posts: 876
Joined: Mon Apr 25, 2016 6:39 pm
Location: "Between the sheets"
Race: Human
Profession: Bartender, Whore
Fame: +51
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Personal Journal
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Medals: 19
Helper (1) Peer Reviewer (1) Artíst (1) Painting With Words (1)
One Arc Later... (1) Living Legend (1) Pioneer (1) Bow Chicka Wow Wow (1)
Right In The Feels (1) Heartbreak (1) Drunkard (1) Murderer (1)
Addict (1) Legend In Waiting (1) Survivor (1) Lol Worthy (1)
Vhalar 716 (1) Idalos Awards 2016 (1) Event Medal (1)

Review Request 2.1.3

Postby Neronin » Thu Feb 15, 2018 10:14 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Taxing Journey
City/Area: Outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence in combat, reanimation
Requested Rewards:

Ryder
Knowledge:
Longsword: Hitting from behind
Longsword: Overhead slash
Longsword: Use a speed advantage
Longsword: Combat in snow
Longsword: Fighting with blurred vision
Endurance: Pushing through immense injury
Leadership: Giving clear orders
Leadership: Taking care of your own

Loot: Various weapons, most for Al’Angyryl but a good quality dagger for Ryder, 100GN cut of the loot taken from tax collector.
Injuries/Overstepping: Mauled hand
Fame: -3 Banditry, -2 Murder
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Neronin
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Skystepping over a battle
Rupturing: Skystepping to avoid the blade
Rupturing: Bringing forces into battle
Rupturing: Using Blink to command a battlefield
Rupturing: Using portals to avoid flanking maneuvers
Intimidation: Using undead friends to scare people
Appraisal: Noting another’s leadership skills
Appraisal: Assessing a subordinate’s quality
Loot: 100GN cut of the tax collector’s gold.
Injuries/Overstepping: Mild overstepping
Fame: -2 magic use, -2 murder
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, Rupturing

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Neronin
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Posts: 312
Joined: Tue Jan 10, 2017 12:34 pm
Location: Etzos
Race: Human
Profession: Museum Curator
Fame: -112
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Medals: 6
Peer Reviewer (1) Painting With Words (1) Guild Master (1) Pioneer (1)
Murderer (1) Survivor (1)

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