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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Hart » Thu Jan 11, 2018 1:51 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Deep is the Fog.
City/Area: Orm'del Sea.
Notes/Warnings: Family death (of an NPC) and associated mourning. Ever seen someone weep over a lemon? No? Well get ready.

Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE (solo, 6 knowledge)--
Endurance: Sleeping in an uncomfortable position
Endurance: Sacrificing your needs to care for another
Navigation: Terms for directions on a ship, starboard, port, bow, stern, etc.
Observation: Knowing when someone is dead
Seafaring: Bring tonic for when someone is ill
Seafaring: Terms for things on a ship, galley, bunk, cabin, etc.

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
Jovy: How she likes her tea
Biqaj: Bury their dead at sea

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Only to the heart. v_v
Fame: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.


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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Navyri » Thu Jan 11, 2018 11:08 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Stealing For The Shipwright
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Sexual tension, but innocent as heck.
Requested Rewards:

Navyri


Skill Knowledge
Linguistics: Practice With Natives for Authenticity
Linguistics: The Sound of a Pidgin
Seduction: Place Their Hands On Areas of Interest
Seduction: “Fun” Can Mean Many Things
Seduction: Don’t Be Scared to Get Physical
Deception: Utilize Half Truths
Deception: Embellish Stories With Detail
Deception: Distract With A Little Flirtation
Deception: The Past is (Re)Written By the Victors
Persuasion: Find Out What They Want & Offer It
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Non-Skill Knowledge
Rakahi: Has Its Own Pidgin
Rakahi: Language of Biqaj
Rakahi: Family Vocabulary
Location: Ne'haer
Ne’haer: Orik’s Shipyard
Ne’haer: Tolerates Naerikk More or Less
Ne’haer: A Port City Filled with Biqaj
Pash Vy’Ryn: Loves Tattooed Women
Pash Vy’Ryn: Not Afraid to Touch Things He Likes
Pash Vy’Ryn: Dangerously Perceptive
Pash Vy’Ryn: A Tempting Biqaj
Pash Vy’Ryn: Tan and Muscled
Pash Vy’Ryn: Shipwright
Pash Vy’Ryn: His Family Lives In Ne’haer
Pash Vy’Ryn: Enjoys Travelling
Pash Vy’Ryn: Plays Music

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Don't think so?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No



Pash Vy'ryn


Skill Knowledge
Business Management: Being the right man for the job
Business Management: Giving an honest price estimate
Negotiation: Flirtation to sweeten the deal
Negotiation: Letting the client work for a discount
Seduction: Don't be shy—touch the things
Seduction: Insatiable curiosity
Ship Building: Recognizing signs of age
Ship Building: Knowing when to scrape the hull
Ship Building: Appraising damages to a sloop
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Non-Skill Knowledge
Immortal: Delroth: Immortal of Birds, Wind, Vanity, Greed
Immortal: Delroth: Mark of Favor looks like feather tattoos
Immortals: Granting Favor gives powers to those they Mark
Ne’haer: Orik’s Shipyard
Navyri: Could be a Biqaj? Could be Naer?
Navyri: Speaks your language, sort of
Navyri: Has some interesting tattoos
Navyri: Has no qualms showing you some skin
Navyri: Doesn't mind a stranger's curious touch
Navyri: Favored by Delroth
Navyri: Hired you
Navyri: Agreed to sweat with you
Navyri: Totally asked you on a date for a discount

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Possibly? Doin' my job, actually.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Warren » Fri Jan 12, 2018 4:34 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: When In Charge
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Cursing and Violence
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Investigation: Simple Conversation Holds Valuable Information
Intimidation: Promise Death To Keep Them From Talking
Fieldcraft: Building A Fire
Fieldcraft: Setting Rabbit Traps
Butchering: Skinning A Rabbit
Tactics: How To Get Out of Rope Bindings

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Oakvale: A Tavern In Krome
Oakvale: Business Is Doing Well
Lianna: Blames Her Brother’s Death On Warren
Lianna: Is A Fighter
Iron Hand: A Number of Corrupt Guards.

Loot: 2 Rabbit pelts
Injuries/Overstepping: Shovel to the head - 5 trials
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Zane » Fri Jan 12, 2018 11:17 am

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Hey girl, are you an aukari...
City/Area: Andaris City, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Flirting/Seduction with great intent so slightly mature, I guess
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 max.)
Detection: Small accessories
Detection: Noticing gentle touches
Detection: Being drunk doesn't help
Detection: Finding a door
Investigation: Using deduction in conversation
Investigation: Deducing the meaning behind touching
Seduction: Bad pick-up lines
Seduction: Whispering
Socialization: Confidence is important
Socialization: Practicing your opening line
Socialization: How to offend a girl 101
Non-skill knowledge
Valeria: An expensive girl
Valeria: Not a whore
Valeria: Offended by you?
Valeria: Appreciates your advice?
Valeria: A confusing woman
Smof: A funnily-named expensive wine father used to buy for women

Loot: Already deducted the moneys from ledger
Injuries/Overstepping: A hangover :|
Fame: Buying a drink for V? Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yes, Valeria posted her request already
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Arlo Creede » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:59 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Not At All Awkward
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None. Arlo uses an ability gained in the Halloween event that means his finger lights up like a flame, when tapped - it doesn't burn or anything, but while it's lit, he is a bit of "weirdness magnet".
Requested Rewards:


Vega

Knowledge: (8 posts = 13 knowledge)
Cosmetology: Shawls make good accessories
Cosmetology: Stockings and high heel shoes make the leg look longer
Cosmetology: Preparation takes a lot of time.
Discipline: Talking yourself down from losing your temper
Discipline: Not speaking to someone so they don't hear your accent.
Etiquette: Don't say "U'frek's Butt" in a nice restaurant.
Logistics: Planning boat buying and crewing
Rhetoric: Use of slang
Rhetoric: Use of analogy
Stealth: Swiping food off a plate without being noticed.
Stealth: Move things to act as a distraction from nefarious deeds


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes



Arlo

Knowledge: (8 posts = 13 knowledge max)
Detection: Spotting signs of temper in your SO
Etiquette: Shave before a date.
Etiquette: Suitable clothing for an expensive restaurant
Etiquette: Reserve the best table to impress the girl
Investigation: How to find out what's going on behind a locked door
Investigation: Asking questions to try and determine behavior
Investigation: Use Lyova as a spy!
Investigation: Determining when someone doesn't fit in by style of dress
Investigation: Behavior which identifies ghosts.
Logistics: Planning boat buying and crewing
Rhetoric: Putting a positive spin on a situation
Socialization: Holding a conversation with two groups at once
Socialization: Not letting your waiter know you're talking to ghosts

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes

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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Qit'ria » Fri Jan 12, 2018 2:55 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Curious Meeting
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Not really. This thread was abandoned and I soloed out the rest.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Act normally when possibly being watched
Climbing: Pulling yourself up a moving cart
Stealth: Using merchant wagons as cover for entering a city undetected
Endurance: Biting down on something to keep from screaming in pain
Resistance: Infection can cause the body to feel hot and cold
Resistance: Infection can cause undue sweats
Resistance: Infection can cause weakness and fatigue
Strength: Pulling yourself up by one arm

Location: Order of the Adunih
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Infection from previous wounds
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes but abandoned part way through
Magic EXP: (No)

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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Zipper » Fri Jan 12, 2018 3:59 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fingles Gravy: Pirate Enthusiast
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Part 1 of a 3 parter. Yana's gem mentioned inside was acquired during the global
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Yanabaga
Rhetoric: butchering names as an insult
Deception: Roll with the role you’ve been given
Strength: Rowing a sloop
Endurance: climbing with tired arms
Discipline: Not smacking someone who tests your patience
Tactics: know the enemy numbers
Tactics: assess whether the enemy is armed or not
Etiquette: don’t speak out of turn
Gem of memory: Can store memories
Zipper: Can identify the properties and abilities of magical items
Zipper: Sometimes convenient to have around, usually not
Zipper: Easily annoyed by butchering her name

Zipper:
Deception: Exploiting those ignorant of Domain magic
Detection: Sensing hypocrisy
Detection: Gauging the limits of how far one can push a prank
Linguistics: A careful choice of words to convey respect
Negotiation: Making a deal
Negotiation: Opening up a meeting with undeserved social pleasantries
Intelligence: Acquiring information on the pirates of Foster’s bay
Intimidation: Vocalizing displeasure with a stare

Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Zane » Fri Jan 12, 2018 8:34 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Strange Little Creature
City/Area: Andaris City
Notes/Warnings: Touch all you want
Requested Rewards: Zane
Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 max.)
Detection: Detecting tunawa
Endurance: Holding a tunawa on a shoulder
Investigation: Detecting emotion in a voice
Investigation: Deciphering a tunawa's voice
Investigation: A tunawa's troubles
Investigation: Deciphering someone's past
Psychology: Consequences of having no home
Psychology: Reading troubles in people/tunawa
Socialization: Introductions

Andaris City: layout
Andaris City: lowtown
Self: A helpful individual
Sinnammyn: A tunawa
Sinnammyn: Moseke's creation
Sinnammyn: Troubled by the past
Sinnammyn: Has no home
Sinnammyn: Now has a home
Tunawa: Moseke's creations
Tunawa: Really small wood people
Tunawa: Can only die by fire and old age
Loot: A new roommate!
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: I imagine positive for offering a home to Sinna. Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No


Sinnammyn
Knowledge:
-Acrobatics: Balancing on Human Shoulders
-Acrobatics: Tumbling Down Human Arms
-Climbing: Clothed Human Arms
-Climbing: Fences
-Mount (Flying): All Beings Need a Break
-Negotiation: Exchanging Knowledge for Help
-Socialization: Asking for Help when you need it
-Socialization: Keeping to your word
-Socialization: Speak up to be heard.

Non-Skill Knowledges

-Andaris:Familiar Streets
-Andaris: Garden Locations
-Andaris: My secret stash locations
-Andaris: Zane's Home, A temporary Home stay

-Drakengard: Zane's post

-Zane: A skyrider, posted at Drakengard
-Zane: Concerned for Lil' Ol' Me
-Zane: Helpful Sod
-Zane: I open up to him easily. Not sure why.
-Zane: Interesting Convo Partner
-Zane: My new house-mate
-Zane: Needs to watch where he's going
-Zane: The friendly giant
-Zane: Reasonable to reasonable requests.
Loot: A new (temporary) home!
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Sinnammyn » Fri Jan 12, 2018 8:37 pm

CODE: SELECT ALL
Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Exposition] Bellesoir Charity Soirée (Entrance)
City/Area: Bellesoir, Rynmere area.
Notes/Warnings: This is just a LONG entrance post. That is all.
Requested Rewards: 6 Knowledges and Skill points
Skill Knowledges:

Field Craft: Finding flowers
Field Craft: Harvesting Petals
Field Craft: Harvesting Berries
Field Craft: Berries For Adhesive
Field Craft: Building A flower Dress, Zi'da flowers (Pansy, Rynmere Marigold)
Acrobatics: Balancing on Tree Branches

Non-skill Knowledges:

Rynmere: Bellesoir
Oliver Venora: Host of the party
Tunawa: Not normally in Clothing
Rynmere Flora: Pansy.
Rynmere Flora: Rymere Marigold.
Self: Nervous around Nobles
Orm'Del Sea: The Great Water's
Self: Hope to find a new home.



Loot: 1 Flower dress (Will be disposed of at the end of the party), 2 Mistletoe berries (will be eaten by the end of the night or destroyed)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Discover a new crafting technique +2 (Flower Dress making?) Supporting a popular cause +2 (The Charity Gala)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

Postby Zane » Fri Jan 12, 2018 8:40 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dead Man's Tale I
City/Area: Forests in Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Blood. Death. Nothing graphic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Barely audible sounds
Final Moment: Feels like a really potent drug
Investigation: Investigating a scene
Mount: Horse: Gallop
Mount: Horse: Sudden Stop
Mount: Horse: Avoiding trees

Dead Man: Died from a stab wound
Dead Man: Fought mages/pirates
Dead Man: Had a daughter called Sarah
Dead Man: Hated mages
The Iron Hand: Dislikes when their horses are used incorrectly
Loot: A really valuable pendant (reviewer's discretion)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Hearing out a man's final words. Promising to deliver the pendant. Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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