Thinking Outside the Bottle

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Thinking Outside the Bottle

Postby Patrick » Thu Nov 10, 2016 8:30 am

So. Branching out to the other parts of the forum after curiosity, I discover somebody *cough Freya cough* wrote her perspective on Patrick as a character. Needless to say I was baffled and enlightened to see such a wonderful outlook, and humbled by the mere fact somebody went to such extent! So with my natural curiosity sated and my awareness that this section of the forum exists, I've proudly allowed myself to post a thread for others to provide their own feedback and insights. (More like agonizingly criticize my terrible faults!)

Anyways feel free to post any sort of commentary and the like here, I'd love to learn where my strong suits and weak suits are in terms of writing. I'm sure there are many, many things anybody can point out that I've either done terribly or miserably elaborated on! (I'm a fan of constructive criticism)
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