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Maebella
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Review
Bahaha, I love how indignant and ruffled Maebella is, coupled with her borderline rude curiosity. Well done, and most entertaining. Below is your well deserved loot. If you have any questions, please PM me. Also please add the provided stamp to your review request found here and please update your CS with all of this information.
Loot
Knowledges
Skill Knowledge:
Non-Skill Knowledge:
| Requirement | ✓ or X | Comment |
| Approved Character | ✓ | -- |
| Updated Thread List for Previous Season | ✓ | -- |
| Updated Skill Point Ledger (Raw, Adjusted, Thread Earned) | ✓✓ ✓ | -- |
| Updated Purse (Seasonal Expense, Wage, Thread deductions) | ✓✓ ✓ | -- |
| Updated Fame Ledger & Table for threads | ✓ ✓ | -- |
| Thread Being Reviewed Linked In CS | ✓ | -- |
Review
| Requirement | Fulfillment | Comment+ |
| Solo or Collab | Collab | +8 Skill Knowledges |
| How many posts? | 5 | +2 Skill Knowledges |
| How many requested? | 5 | -- |
| Are all posts greater than 250 words? | ✓ | 680, 804, 910, 752, 966 |
| Is the thread greater than 1500 words? | ✓ | 4112 |
| Knowledges appropriate? | ✓ | -- |
| Loot appropriate? | N/A | -- |
| Fame appropriate? | N/A | -- |
| Injuries appropriate? | N/A | -- |
Bahaha, I love how indignant and ruffled Maebella is, coupled with her borderline rude curiosity. Well done, and most entertaining. Below is your well deserved loot. If you have any questions, please PM me. Also please add the provided stamp to your review request found here and please update your CS with all of this information.
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| Skill Points | +15 | -- |
| Magic Points available? | No | -- |
| Fame | N/A | -- |
| Injuries | N/A | -- |
Skill Knowledge:
- Etiquette: Quiet in the library
- Linguistics: Inferring information from word choice
- Etiquette: Constant questions are rude
- Etiquette: Knowing when to humble yourself
- Rhetoric: Framing a logical argument
Non-Skill Knowledge:
- Caius Gawyne: Bookbinder's Apprentice
- Caius Gawyne: Mixture of human, Aukari, Biqaj and Immortal
- Caius Gawyne: Nobleman from Rynmere
- Caius Gawyne: Second son of a Baron
- Caius Gawyne: Descended from Ziell
- Biqai: Eyes change colour based on emotions
- Aukari: Have hot tempers
- The House of Gawyne: Have the gift of prophecy
- Caius Gawyne: Can prophesise the time of his own death
- Caius Gawyne: Scholar
Caius Gawyne
Pre Review Checklist
Review
Oh boy, seeing the pride drawn out of Caius is lovely, as well as his attitude. Such a fun tit for tat. Hilarious. Below is your well deserved loot. If you have any questions, please PM me. Also please add the provided stamp to your review request found here and please update your CS with all of this information.
Loot
Knowledges
Skill Knowledge:
Non-Skill Knowledge:
| Requirement | ✓ or X | Comment |
| Approved Character | ✓ | -- |
| Updated Thread List for Previous Season | ✓ | -- |
| Updated Skill Point Ledger (Raw, Adjusted, Thread Earned) | ✓ ✓ ✓ | -- |
| Updated Purse (Seasonal Expense, Wage, Thread deductions) | XX✓ | Pending wages |
| Updated Fame Ledger & Table for threads | ✓ ✓ | -- |
| Thread Being Reviewed Linked In CS | ✓ | -- |
Review
| Requirement | Fulfillment | Comment+ |
| Solo or Collab | Collab | +8 Skill Knowledges |
| How many posts? | 5 | +2 Skill Knowledges |
| How many requested? | 10 | -- |
| Are all posts greater than 250 words? | ✓ | 936, 664, 681, 1002, 410 |
| Is the thread greater than 1500 words? | ✓ | 3693 |
| Knowledges appropriate? | ✓ | -- |
| Loot appropriate? | N/A | -- |
| Fame appropriate? | N/A | -- |
| Injuries appropriate? | N/A | -- |
Oh boy, seeing the pride drawn out of Caius is lovely, as well as his attitude. Such a fun tit for tat. Hilarious. Below is your well deserved loot. If you have any questions, please PM me. Also please add the provided stamp to your review request found here and please update your CS with all of this information.
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[center][img]/gallery/image.php?album_id=39&image_id=12064[/img][/center]| Reward | Amount | Comment |
| Skill Points | +15 | -- |
| Magic Points available? | No | -- |
| Fame | N/A | -- |
| Injuries | N/A | -- |
Skill Knowledge:
- Discipline: Humility is difficult
- Discipline: Containing your noble airs
- Etiquette: Asking for directions with as few bad words as possible
- Etiquette: Answering the important questions first
- Linguistics: Semantics of illegitimacy
- Linguistics: Cultural contexts of the word noble
- Politics: Refuting illegitimacy
- Politics: The weight of your authority is relative to your location
- Rhetoric: Calling someone rude
- Rhetoric: Admitting your personal shortcomings without apology
Non-Skill Knowledge:
- Location: Viden Academy
- Location: Prime Atheneum
- Viden: Sarding Cold in Ashan
- Maebella: Eidisi
- Maebella: Prime Atheneum clerk
- Maebella: Asks too many sarding questions
- Maebella: Is still young for her race
- Maebella: Has no concept of Rynmere politics
- Maebella: Doesn't need a title (good for her)